Chapter 20 Reflection
"What's going on?"
At the entrance of the alleyway in the chaotic neighborhood of Compton, the police car stopped there with an annoying sirens.
Opening the car door, a white patrolman with a big belly walked out of the car.
He reached out and touched the pistol at his waist, and asked his colleagues who were investigating in the alley.
"nothing."
Hearing the inquiry from the white patrol officer, the police who arrived first shrugged, turned their heads and looked at the frightened people behind him, and shook their heads.
"I just met a group of drunks who called fake police."
"Yeah."
Hearing his colleague's reply, the nervous look on the white policeman's face suddenly dropped a little. While he breathed a sigh of relief, the palm he placed on his waist still did not put down.
After all, this is one of the most dangerous areas in Los Angeles with the highest crime rate, and it is also one of the areas with the highest police death rate. Walking in such dangerous neighborhoods, especially white policemen like him, you may at any time rush out of people of color who think they are "discriminated" on the roadside, shoot at the same time, and then become kind citizens who "work diligently" under the exaggeration of the TV media.
But they, the police who actually protect the safety of citizens, have become the culprits in everything.
It is obvious that these policemen are the greatest security guarantee for the entire city.
Even if they occasionally shoot in order to prevent suicides from shooting, they spray pepper spray on children without any weapons, selective enforcement.
But can they blame this?
They just want to make the country safer.
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"You must believe me, there is really a bar here!"
Hearing the conversation between the police, the man Bert immediately shouted with excitement.
"This is true, I'm not lying. In fact, I'm not the only one who entered the bar, my friends are like me..."
"Yes, yes, a bar full of monsters."
He nodded perfunctorily and looked at Burt, who was blushing with a drunken face in front of him,
The patrolman obviously did not believe what he said.
"Halloween is over long ago, Mr. Burt."
After recording the alarm record, the patrolman closed the booklet in his hand, looked up at the walls in the alley, and could not see any bars except for the random graffiti, and then said to Bert.
"Now, Mr. Bert, you lied to the police and caused unnecessary waste of human resources to be paid for a fine of $500."
"Fine, why?!"
"Everything I said is true, I did not call the fake police!"
When the police thought they had called the fake police, especially if they needed to fine them, the expression on Bert's face became even more excited.
However, the police responded equally skillfully to this.
In the alley, the two policemen looked at each other silently, and then pulled out their guns and warned them at a speed that was lightning speed.
"The target resists, and the arrest has been carried out now."
Bert, who was emotionally excited, swept the remaining four people in front of him and interrogated with severe eyes.
"Maybe, any of you, like Mr. Bert, has entered that bar?"
“…”
Faced with the police's oppressive gaze and a heavy fine of 500 US dollars, Cassie and others quickly shook their heads and denied them.
"No, Mr. Police, we've never seen any bars, never..."
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【Plot Value】: 3513
And here, just when the nasty man Bert and others were suffering from the bar incident.
On the other side, in the apartment room.
Zhao Yuan shook his head with some dissatisfaction at the [Plot Value] displayed on the broken panel of the system.
Overall, although the script "Monster Bar" has spent a lot of effort on the scene, the finished product actually is not as dramatic as he thought before, or because the characters in the script are too scattered, many of the scenes he conceived in his mind have turned into real scenes that are obviously not as expected.
Even some plot effects are not much different from the 50 cents special effects in the B-level films in Zhao Yuan's eyes.
If it weren't for the bar scenes that cost 1,000 [Plot Value] as support rendering, the finished product of the entire script might not even meet the most basic requirements.
"Sure enough, the common problem of newcomers is that they think too much."
Whether it is a new director or a screenwriter, they often give various disproportionate ideological meanings to the works in their hands, and the result of this is often to make an otherwise simple story impossible to understand.
There is no doubt that Zhao Yuan was also trapped in such a trap.
After systematically evolving the script of "Cycle", I couldn't wait to try a group scene "Strange Bar" that was several times more complicated than the previous script.
However, compared to those guys who only gained the reputation in the end.
What makes Zhao Yuan lucky is that his script evolved in the real world through system. With the help of the system, even if the storyline of the entire script is average, under the bonus called reality, he still fulfilled his most basic requirements and helped him obtain enough [plot value].
"Perhaps, I should try to create a story that exists in the real world that I am familiar with, rather than a script I made out of thin air."
His eyes fell on the [Plot Value] of the system's broken panel, and Zhao Yuan thought silently.
After a few seconds, he restrained his thoughts and once again turned his attention to another page on the panel.
Reflection is the reflection, the operations that should be carried out must not be forgotten.
After all, whether you are satisfied or not, the script of "Strange Bar" has ended its evolution. Instead of caring about the unsatisfactory parts of the script, it is better to look at the system that has converted some of the items in the script as commodities that can be redeemed.
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【****System &…*Backend****History…Record…&%¥…&*Commodity…】
[Script 2]: "Strange Bar"
【World Evolution Rate】: 0.02%
[Plot props - inferior wine of immortality] (300/redeem)
【Effect: Eternal Life】
【Introduction: This is a poor glass of immortal wine. Drink it and you will gain a weak vitality.】
【Note 1: Believe me, you will never want to know what is added to the materials that made it!】
【Note 2: Eternal life is not a blessing, but a cruel curse.】
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[Plot Scene Card - Burning Bone Bar (2/2)] (500)
[Card Level: Black Iron]
[Introduction: You can insert the scenes in the card into a certain script at will without consuming unnecessary [Plot Value] points.]
Chapter completed!