I have read many book reviews from book friends. First of all, thank you for your corrections. Because I just started writing books, this book naturally has many problems. The city of Rome was not built in one day. Of course, it is impossible to become a everyone after writing books. I think everyone can understand this. Please give me time to correct my problems.

The first thing to be explained is the character problem of the protagonist. Many friends who read books are not accustomed to the hesitation and confusion of the protagonist, and some of them are even more rude. I want to ask you, you have seen a few people in life who never consider things and never care about the consequences. Don’t read many books about the protagonists who are willing to revenge and think that the same is true in life. If you think so, then I will tell you. You are wrong! At least there are very few such people among the friends I know. On the contrary, there are too many people with concerns. Furthermore, the protagonist is a thirty-year-old man, not twenty-eight or eighteen. Impulse is not a characteristic of this age. People always hesitate when facing choices. And the easier it is to make up their minds. I wonder if I think so, right?

Second, about the protagonist's ability. What I want to shape is an ordinary person. Although I know some martial arts, he is not a superman, nor a genius. So I don't want to transform him into an omnipotent person, a superb genius. I believe that such a person will not have. People may be a genius in a certain aspect, but they cannot be a comprehensive genius. Although my YY novel is YY, I don't want YY. Literature comes from life and is higher than life. But it should not be separated from life. What do you think?

Third, it is too much of the description of the dark side in the book. Many people have a very slight remark about it. They think that my description is a bit too much. I admit that it may be a bit exaggerated. However, such a thing is not impossible. Let me tell you a real thing that happened to me. I had a car accident in 1999. I was in a coma for more than four hours and almost died. Unfortunately, the person who hit me was the younger brother of the first deputy director of the Municipal Public Security Bureau. Guess what? The police from the Municipal Accident Department actually rushed me out of the hospital! The reason was that I wanted to blackmail me! Do you believe it? But it did happen to me, whether you believe it or not. There are many such things, but I can't say it here.

Fourth, regarding the issue of maturity. Many friends say that the protagonist in the book is immature and will not be intrigued. Don’t forget that he is just a person who just came out of a small city and has never seen any big world. What does he know? Some people say that people in shopping malls and officialdoms cannot speak so directly. To be honest, the person who says this has no social experience at all. I have never met an official who is too big, but I have only met the director. Those people speak very loudly. Maybe they will speak carefully in front of their boss, but for people with lower status than him, it is not like that!

Fifth, about kindness. I have always believed that good people will be rewarded! At least don’t do things that are sorry for your conscience. At the same time, I believe that there are always more good people in this world than bad guys. So I just want to write about a good person, and I don’t want to write about a protagonist who uses any means to achieve his goal.

I admit that there are many shortcomings in my book. For example, the protagonist has been hesitating for too long, which has created an illusion of no opinion. Secondly, I have described the contradictions in the protagonist's personality a little too much, which may make everyone a little confused and unable to feel his true personality. I will now tell you the protagonist's personality in the main story: kind, upright, likes to help others, and is as jealous as a hatred, but it is a bit too easy to believe in people. Sometimes I hesitate to do things because I am afraid of hurting others.

Finally, I would like to thank you again for your support and encouragement for me. Especially like: Rommel0425, Doudouづ利官网, zExIsunman, Haike Oil, Jingle Ringing Bells, wwpgn, Sanxiang, jason.zhang, reverse direction rabbit, soschenkun1, Youping, Leng Xin, reading and reading, super clown, Hongqiao people, Fengchen Book Hero, love and romance, these friends, they have supported me since a long time ago. Of course, there are many friends who may not even know the names. They are also silently supporting me. Here, Xiao Fang sincerely wants you to express his gratitude. It is precisely because of you that I persevered. Thank you, sincerely thank you, and I hope you will continue to support me in the future. At the same time, I hope that my friends can support me. I have nothing to give to everyone, I can only guarantee that I will do my best to write this book well. Ensure it is completed!!

In addition, I would like to say that my book is not well written, and I dare not expect everyone to agree with it. I don’t object to everyone’s opinions. On the contrary, I hope that everyone will give me more opinions to help me improve. However, I hope that those books will not maliciously attack me. As for those friends who say that this book is "can’t read" or "trash" or something, since you don’t read it, I won’t force it. But please respect me. Don’t post these book reviews. If you don’t read it, please don’t criticize me. You don’t need to criticize me for this. You don’t need to criticize me for this. You can say that the bad things are, I correct them, but I just belittle me like this. I can’t accept it.

Okay, let’s say so much. Thank you again for your concern and support. For you and my friends, I will definitely work hard to write this book well, believe me!!

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