Chapter 155 Beautiful daily life on campus
Li Da's daily study life has begun. Because he agreed to participate in the essay competition yesterday, he had a new task in the morning, which was to check the essays of the two important participants next to him.
First, I read Tang Youyou's essay. She was the only one who wrote the essay according to Li Da's problem-solving ideas. It was quite satisfactory and not very spiritual. It was considered a passing essay. But if you want to participate in the competition at this level, you should definitely do it.
Cannon fodder, there is a high probability that the Chinese teacher will not be able to pass the first level.
"Although I don't know how to change it specifically, I suggest rewriting it."
Tang Youyou: "?"
To put it simply, it was too ordinary, so ordinary that Li Da didn’t know how to improve it.
But there are no obvious problems.
However, seeing that Tang Youyou didn't quite understand, Li Da added: "Your article is like a glass of boiled water, ordinary and tasteless. To pass the preliminary selection, the article must at least be able to
It makes people’s eyes brighter, but your article has no highlights.”
Tang Youyou: "..."
Luo Dongqing also held the manuscript that he had racked his brains to write last night. When he heard Li Da's comments on Tang Youyou's composition, he couldn't help but tremble and did not dare to show it to Li Da.
She used to think Li Da had a venomous tongue, but compared with now, this is nothing...
Tang Youyou looked depressed. Although Li Da was scolded by Li Da every day, she would still shut herself off when it was time to shut herself up.
However, she could understand what Li Da meant. It was precisely because of their good relationship that Li Da did not comfort her with polite words. He spoke very directly and did not worry about her being angry.
It can be seen that Li Da still trusts her very much.
Naturally, Tang Youyou deserves this trust, and she does not blame Li Da for being too harsh in her criticism. She is just frustrated that the article was poorly written, and she obviously worked very hard to write it.
After Li Da commented on Tang Youyou, he extended his hand to Luo Dongqing, who was a little timid.
Luo Dongqing was timid, holding the manuscript in front of her chest, and said weakly: "Don't be cruel to me..."
"I certainly won't."
Li Da assured with a serious look on his face.
Then, he picked up Luo Dongqing's composition book.
Li Da frowned.
Li Da took a deep breath.
Finally, amid Luo Dongqing's nervous expression, Li Da's expression relaxed.
"I think you need to start training."
Of course Li Da is not being mean to Luo Dongqing, he is just stating the facts.
In fact, Li Da still had something to say.
He had seen Luo Dongqing's composition. It was at the level of a normal person and there was no problem in passing it. However, the composition was so incoherent that Li Da didn't even know what she was expressing.
And the logic is very problematic.
One moment I wrote about being loyal to love, which was obviously off topic, and the next moment I mentioned the love of parents, but they were just comments and no discussion.
Moreover, the evaluation is very unreasonable and inconsistent with universal values.
Most people's view is that the father is kind and the son is filial. Parents care about their children and children are filial to their parents. This is a harmonious state.
But there is no such thing in Luo Dongqing's writings.
Li Da felt that there might be something wrong with her thinking, but considering that the problem in this area might be quite acute, Li Da guessed that Luo Dongqing's relationship with her family might be bad, so she didn't say anything.
He just asked her to carry out special training on this, but did not go into the deeper content.
The relationship between Luo Dongqing and his family was not good. This speculation was made not only because of an essay, but also because of Li Da's memories of Luo Dongqing.
When I first met Luo Dongqing, she looked like a rebellious girl. Generally, teenagers who behave like this have conflicts with their families.
Of course, this kind of contradiction is rarely irreconcilable, but it is more acute in rebellious teenagers.
Li Da deliberately avoided the point that might irritate Luo Dongqing. Despite this, Luo Dongqing still exuded the same low pressure as Tang Youyou.
Early in the morning, both of them were autistic.
Soon, the morning passed like this. When the fourth period ended, Li Da walked towards the cafeteria with his lunch box, and Luo Dongqing exchanged glances with Tang Youyou.
There are little secrets between girls. Before Li Da was aware of it, the two of them had agreed to go to the garden to take a peek.
Tang Youyou understood and confirmed with her eyes that she would eat quickly.
They knew that Li Da would go to the garden to meet that girl at noon!
None of them knew who wrote the love letter, because Li Da deliberately concealed the name of the writer, otherwise, they would have taken action long ago.
But Li Da didn't have the determination to do something very important, so he went to order a dish that cost six yuan.
After getting rich, Li Da almost wanted to order a double portion of the dishes, but he thought that would be too ridiculous. It would be better to eat some fruits and desserts after the meal, which would be more nutritionally balanced.
Because the economy is relatively affluent, Li Da can think about these things. In the past, he only had to think about having enough food.
There are not many male classmates in the class. The only one Li Da has good relations with is Liu Yang, and this fake has begun to indulge in love. Naturally, he will not play with Li Da every day. And Long Hao is very afraid of Li Da.
Da, I don’t have the courage to have dinner with Li Da.
Therefore, Li Da chose a corner seat and sat down alone.
Then, Xu Wenwen and her friends discovered Li Da.
"Let's go, let's sit over there!"
Under the encouragement of her friends, Xu Wenwen half pushed her to sit opposite Li Da, and in order to embolden her, the other two girls also sat on the side.
Three women and one drama.
When three women come together, they will immediately throw away the reserve and weakness of girls, and they will not hesitate to tease men. Most men may feel uncomfortable when they see a bunch of warblers, but Li Da does not
Same.
He has experienced this kind of environment a lot and is very adaptable.
Moreover, getting along with girls for a long time is also beneficial.
Emotional intelligence can be improved a lot, and you can better understand girls' thoughts.
Well, it's also easier to be single.
Suddenly there were a few people in front of him. Li Da raised his head and glanced a few times at Xu Wenwen's face, almost confirming her identity.
Oh, this is a classmate in the class.
The one who yelled at him yesterday.
But he did not connect the girl with the person who wrote the love letter.
When he noticed that her face was red and she seemed to be shy, Li Da remained calm, but he was thinking in his heart, could it be that my luck has arrived?
Regarding this, Li Da was reserved on the surface, but felt secretly happy inside.
Of course, if he is happy, he will not attract bees and butterflies.
Li Da just glanced at them and said nothing.
"Um, hello, I'm Xu Wenwen."
Chapter completed!