The book "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" began at the end of a certain year in the Qingyuan period of Ningzong of the Southern Song Dynasty. Please read the book Wｗ∮Ｗ∫.

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The descendant of Zhongliang who lived in seclusion in Niujia Village outside Lin'an, Yang Tiexin's family suffered a disaster and was killed by the Southern Song government colluded with the Jin king's prince Wanyan Honglie. The pregnant wife Guo Li Ping and Yang Bao Xiruo also disappeared. The bad news came. Guo and Yang's friend Qiu Chuji, the Taoist priest of Quanzhen Sect, was furious and chased the murderer who killed Guo and Yang.

He missed his lost friends and family, and ran around Lin'an to investigate but failed. Then he was deceived by the traitor Duan Tiandemeng and had a conflict with the seven monsters in Jiangnan in Jiaxing, and both suffered losses. Afterwards, Qiu Chuji and the seven monsters in Jiangnan discovered the plot of the traitor and explained the military harmony, but the competition was not decided. Qiu Chuji made an appointment with the seven monsters in Jiangnan to find people together, and went to rescue Yang Tiexin's wife Bao Xiruo, and the seven monsters in Jiangnan went to rescue Guo Xiaotian's wife Li Ping, and each raised the children of the two families to become adults. Eighteen years later, Guo Yang's descendants competed for the competition and then decided to win. The seven monsters in Jiangnan were unrighteous and agreed with the promise.

Xuan Yuemeng nervously handed the main text she wrote to Zhao Qingluo, who was still reading the outline and the detailed outline, "Let's take a look?"

He had no idea what people in this era would think of the conceptual subjects of martial arts novels. There were no martial arts novels in the late Qing Dynasty. Even if there were a little budding genre, it was definitely not a very pure martial arts novel like Xuan Yuemeng.

Zhao Qingluo raised her mouth and said, "I can't even understand your outline, detailed outline, etc., that is, you can understand it. Look at your word, no wonder they all have objections to your qualification for the examination. This word is far worse than your elder brother."

Xuan Yuemeng was very discouraged and said, "What did Xuan Yuelei do?" He felt a little jealous. "I wrote it casually, as long as I can understand it, what is so easy to write?"

Zhao Qingluo said seriously: "You must not think so when writing. You must write every word seriously no matter when it is, otherwise you will not be able to write it well."

Xuan Yuemeng nodded, "I know, Teacher Zhao, no matter when I write in the future, please read the book W÷ｗΩＷ∮.∮ＱingKanShu．cC all stroke by stroke, serious, okay? You can read my text first!"

Zhao Qingluo rolled his eyes, took Xuan Yuemeng's manuscript, and frowned at the beginning. "This is a novel? What the hell is it? Dali can write such things? How come you write the same thing as we usually say? Why do you have so many small things in the middle? What are these?"

Xuan Yuemeng sweated and explained: "These are punctuation marks. Without punctuation marks, how difficult it looks?"

In fact, punctuation marks were already there during the Tongzhi period, and the source was in Europe.

After the Opium War, new ideas were introduced, and Western punctuation also followed.

The first to introduce punctuation marks from abroad was Zhang Deyi, a student from Tongwenguan.

Tongwenguan was established by the Qing government to cultivate foreign language talents during the Westernization Movement, and Zhang Deyi was one of the first batch of students in the English class.

In February of the seventh year of Tongzhi (1868), the retired Minister to China Pu Anchen led the "Chinese Mission" to Europe and the United States. Zhang Deyi also became one of the personnel in the delegation.

Zhang Deyi has a habit, which is that no matter which country he goes to, he likes to record all the local scenery, famous objects, and customs, and compile them into a booklet under the name of "speaking strange things".

From 1868 to 1869, he completed "Another Stories". There is a passage that introduces Western punctuation, saying: "The reading and explanation of the sentences of books in various countries in Thailand are very troublesome.

Although Zhang Deyi was not consciously introducing punctuation to the domestic intellectual community, or even with an opposition tone, thinking that these punctuation was cumbersome, but in the process of unintentional planting willows, it brought a new trend to the exhibition of Chinese language symbols.

However, at this time, Zhang Deyi people were still overseas, traveling around the world with Pu Anchen and signing traitorous treaties everywhere!

And at this time, even the punctuation marks in Europe are still very shallow. Please read the book Wｗ∫Ｗ∮.

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cC is not as detailed as Xuan Yuemeng knows, so Xuan Yuemeng is definitely the originator of modern and modern punctuation marks.

Xuan Yuemeng didn’t know these things, and she didn’t even know that she had an impact on world culture without knowing it!

He just wrote novels according to his own language habits, and he also needed Zhao Qingluo to help him modify them.

Zhao Qingluo nodded and commented softly: "These punctuation marks are pretty good. I can understand them only the first time I read them. With these punctuation marks, the sentences are much more vivid, and you can comment them at the beginning of the novel. I believe that those who read them can accept it. Although what you write is a bit vulgar, it looks quite comfortable and does not take any brains."

Xuan Yuemeng was surprised that Zhao Qingluo could accept his sentence and smiled and said, "Yes, then you can read what I wrote quickly. Is there any other problem? Do you think you like it?"

I briefly discussed the use of punctuation marks, and Zhao Qingluo continued to read. The beauty stretched out. Although Xuan Yuemeng wrote very white, just like she usually spoke, there was a kind of charm mixed in it, which made people feel very touching when reading. The content of the whole chapter was simple and easy to understand, and the thoughts were clear. Reading it made people feel comfortable and relaxed.

Zhao Qingluo looked at Xuan Yuemeng in surprise: "Is this what you wrote? What is the matter in your mind? You are really a child prodigy!"

Xuan Yuemeng said proudly: "Did you know? Are you in love with me?"

Zhao Qingluo's pink face turned red, and she continued to widen her eyes. She read the chapter written by Xuan Yuemeng again, and was too lazy to argue with Xuan Yuemeng.

Zhao Qingluo: "I can help you make corrections. You can write another chapter for me to show? How did the Guo family and the Yang family go? Did Qiu Chuji save their wife? Guo Xiaotian is dead, is Yang Tiexin dead?"

Xuan Yuemeng listened to Zhao Qingluo's questions with pride, knowing that she was already in the show, and smiled and said, "Yes, let me kiss you, I'll tell you."

Zhao Qingluo clamped Xuan Yuemeng's fleshy ears with two fingers, "Let you talk nonsense again." But as she said that, she kissed Xuan Yuemeng's chubby face, "Well, is it OK now? Tell me?"

Xuan Yuemeng sweated heavily, it was me who wanted to kiss you, not that I asked you to kiss me, "What's the use of this? You're happy now, I'm not happy!"

When Zhao Qingluo heard the word "Shuang", her pink face turned red and she gave Xuan Yuemeng a blank look, "If you don't say it, you're stingy."

Because Xuan Yuemeng was too tired to write and was too young, he asked the maid to go to the foreign company to find a accountant. He told him to tell the story, and the accountant was shocked to see that the young master could write novels without any trouble.

In this way, after the accountant recorded the record, Zhao Qingluo let the rhetoric, Xuan Yuemeng actually completed the manuscript of more than 40,000 words in one afternoon!

Although Xuan Yuemeng gave herself a certain confidence in Zhao Qingluo's performance and even girls of this era liked to watch it, he was not overly optimistic because Zhao Qingluo could not represent the main consumer force of this era!

The main consumer force must be rich people who are literate. He can't guarantee that people like Xuan Hongtao and Zeng Jize will love to watch.

As for Xuan Yuewen and Xuan Yuewu, he was not sure, so Xuan Yuelei didn’t have to think about it!

These people are the main consumers, they can afford to buy and understand it, but none of the four people are sure of it. It should be said that none of the five people are sure, such as Wang Zhankui, Dali, Dazhi, Daniu, etc., they must like to read it, but how many words can Wang Zhankui and the others know?

Xuan Yuemeng was not sure about taking advantage of the newspaper industry by serializing novels, but he had only this way. He could not think of other ways for the time being.

During the creation process, Xuan Yuemeng did not just copy Lao Jin's things. He sympathized with Yang Kang. Moreover, Yang Kang was just a stereotyped character in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" in the past. It was because everyone had too deep impression of the 1983 version of The Legend of the Condor Heroes, so they felt that Yang Kang was flesh and blood. In fact, the number of appearances in the original "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" was extremely limited.

Xuan Yuemeng added the scenes of Yang Kang and Mu Nianci, and also added the scenes of Princess Hua Zheng, which made Princess Hua Zheng worship King Jin Lun as her master and brought out King Jin Lun in advance.

When Lao Jin was creating the original "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", he must have not yet prepared to write the sequel "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", so in some ambushing places, Xuan Yuemeng also arranged some short stories in advance, plus the number of words he wrote in the article, and added some personal favorite scenes. In this way, the "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" of about one million words and forty chapters has increased to 200 chapters in Xuan Yuemeng's new outline! It has increased by five times!

It took only two days for Xuan Yuemeng to complete the outline of the entire "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". On the third day, Zhao Qingluo also placed the first chapter of the re-worded "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" in front of Xuan Yuemeng.

Xuan Yuemeng looked carefully and said in surprise: "The writing style is great, better than Lao Jin's writing style!"

Zhao Qingluo wondered: "Who is Lao Jin?"

Xuan Yuemeng smiled, "It's a not-famous author in the previous dynasty. Don't worry, please let someone take the manuscript quickly! How about Dali contacting the novelist?"

Zhao Qingluo nodded, "Dali just came back and asked more than 100 semicolons to mobilize us to conduct essay contests and sign contracts with novelists. They have all gone out. The response is good. More than a dozen novelists have to cooperate with us. If you have money, who will not make money? Those who write books are very poor."

Xuan Yuemeng nodded with a smile, "Yes, this is a good thing. It can not only activate the literary world, but also increase the income of novelists. It is definitely beneficial to the cultural cause of the Qing Dynasty! Let's take the manuscript, let's use it as the beginning! Let everyone take a look!"

Zhao Qingluo gave Xuan Yuemeng a white look, "Let's talk about it when it's done? It's not done yet, but it's still a child."
Chapter completed!