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Chapter 46 This is the reaction of normal people

"We don't need to be too anxious to do anything before the funding of the essay competition is completed. We will also make promotional posters and copywriting, etc."

"I also need to go and negotiate with the students from the broadcasting club to report the time for the acceptance of our literary editorial competition."

"Ahem, of course, just take these things slowly. Let's talk about the issue of the newspaper and magazine you two have produced." Chiyo Akane brought the topic back, which could have caused the four people present to escape the strange atmosphere just now.

At least Heiyu and Wanlilian will not withdraw from the community now, so just return to the current focus.

Miura Ran put the documents they had just left, walked over, and began to analyze the newspaper they had done with Hei Yu and Wan Lilian.

When they were reading it just now, they did not find any problems, but as seniors, they insisted on asking some questions to talk about it, right? And this is also a very simple operation for them. After all, they are all people who write articles, and they are all basic qualities.

"First of all, you start with the style. You are very bold. You are using the first person to write a picture of a freshman entering the campus. The writing style here is also very good."

"However, the length of the description of scenery here can be slightly shortened. Although the first person and subjective style emphasize this sense of substitution, it is a newspaper after all, so it still needs to be slightly refined." Miura Lan expressed his own opinions on the first half of the article.

"Let's talk about the introduction of various facilities on campus and the introduction of clubs later, there is actually no need to be so detailed."

"Just just need to describe a rough, hazy feeling. If you write this way, our literary club will not receive advertising fees from those clubs, but will lose a little."

"Of course, you don't need to change it. This is just my nitpicking place." It was Chiyo Akane's turn now.

The two people's evaluations are actually quite similar, and they both seem to be quite humble in Heiyu's opinion. However, this also indirectly shows how well Wan Lilian controls the first-person articles.

It is definitely the best choice to let her be your own writing assistant and help you polish your light novels.

After all, light novels are called the main feature of the first person.

"As for other aspects, typesetting and composition, Lan Jiang and I think it's great and perfect... To be honest, just print it out directly, and it's not a big problem to be released on campus." Chiyo Akane looked at Kuroha and Wanli, who were not responding, and couldn't help but praise him.

Wan Lilian didn't expect that she would be recognized by two seniors so smoothly, because one was the first in the national award and the other was the author of "The End of Day". The two people must have a very picky vision, but they were praised so easily...

Wan Lilian felt that it was a bit unreal to tell the truth.

Her previous article was also said by editor Takai Shengzi to be not innovative enough and not as standard as possible...

In addition, she has always written objective styles, so when she was writing subjective styles this time, she was still very nervous inside.

I thought at least I would be selected by the seniors for more than a dozen shortcomings, but I didn't expect...

"Then the newspapers have passed the test?" Hei Yu asked.

"Yes, then what I want to talk to you next is related to the review competition." Chiyo Akane naturally knew what Kuroyu cares about the most, and she said with a smile.

"Before, because Lan Jiang and I didn't know much about the specific level of you two, we said that we could guide your respective articles and use them as a participant in the review competition."

"But after reading this newspaper, I think... you two don't need our guidance. Of course, if you have any doubts, you can ask us generously. Lan Jiang and I will definitely pass on our own experiences, but... you should write the article slowly."

"I believe you can grasp the key points, so... this article doesn't need to be handed over to us in three days. After all, the review competition doesn't start so quickly."

"I can probably see that the first half of the newspaper was written by classmate Wanli, and the second half was Hei Yujun. You both have both writing skills and skills, so we really don't need our guidance." Miura Lan also gave affirmation.

Compared with Yamada and Tsukino last year, Kuroe and Wanlien's qualifications are indeed much better.

This also made Miura Lan more confident in this year's literary competition.

"However, I can first introduce to you the members of the jury competition, mainly four Chinese language teachers in the first year of high school and four badge owners to evaluate it."

"So, Lan Jiang is one of the eight judges." Chiyo Akane looked at the silver badge on Miura's chest and smiled.

"It is precisely because of Lan Jiang that we have the confidence to say things that guarantee that you will get the second-class national award."

"But from the moment, you don't need us to guarantee anything. You can win the awards by yourself."

"So, come on, Hei Yujun, and Wanli classmate."

Wan Lilian nodded and bowed to her feet very seriously and replied: "Thank you two seniors, I can."

Kuroyu looked at the silver badge on Miura's chest thoughtfully. After a while, he asked, "Is the condition for getting this badge the first national award in the competition?"

"Yes." Chiyo nodded and said, "As for being called the first national award, not the first national award, the main emphasis is on the first national award. Only with such an honor can one be recognized by the private high school in the new government and obtain the badge."

"Then, why don't you?" Kuroyu looked at Chiyo Akane and asked.

It sounds like a bit rude, but Chiyo Akane's eyes did not fluctuate at all. Obviously, this problem will not have any impact on her, or it may be a sarcasm.

"The main reason is that this competition is for ordinary high school students. Because I have won official awards in the literary world in three years, I have already made my debut as a formal writer. In order to maintain the fairness and fairness of the competition, writers who debuted are not allowed to participate in this competition."

When Chiyo Akane finished speaking these things, she felt that she had found her home court.

I successfully pretended to be x in front of Hei Yu. This kind of refreshing feeling is hard to describe in words.

Anyway, it's very refreshing!

However, Hei Yu's expression was still very calm and did not become the expression of admiration he imagined...

However, if Hei Yu does not support the show, it does not mean that Wan Lilian is the same.

Wan Lilian's little mouth has turned into an O-shaped shape, and the surprise in her eyes is enough to express her admiration.

Chiyo Akane nodded with satisfaction when she saw Wanli Rei's reaction.
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