First of all, let me talk about some small ideas from writing in the past three months.

It is much smoother than when I wrote it before, and the plot is relatively stable, so there is a line walking.

Because I have learned a lot and read a lot, I am much better in plot design than when I wrote the previous one.

Well, I feel myself, don't scold me.

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A more satisfactory plot written: a rainy amusement park, a date to buy clothes?

I am not satisfied with the writing: except for the above two - such as Pingliang brothers, and the Black Feather Commendation Conference, the first emotional scene between Qian and Lan, and the second time at the moment...

If I could remake, I might be better!

Then one by one character said.

First of all, Hei Yu: the protagonist, the unquestionable center of the story, the main line around him is to transform him from his originally extremely extreme, rational and indifferent personality.

Wan Lilian: The heroine, my treasure, in addition to selling her germination benefits and eating candy, she also wants to come out with Hei Yu. This is her role mission.

Miura Ran: From being emotionally slow to being emotionally sensitive, it can be regarded as a character who came out with Chiyo Akane.

Chiyo Akane: From emotional sensitivity to emotional depression, emotional dullness, and then back to normal.

Qiandao Flower: It’s useless for the time being.

This is probably what I wrote so far.

The lines written by Akane and Blue now have a certain impact on Black Feather, so they are considered as branch line insertion main line.

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This book took a lot of thought.

But it still looks like this, but it doesn't matter!

I'm thick-skinned and I'm proud!

Some people think it’s a blessing!

I worked hard to finish writing, and I hope I would look back and summarize when I finished writing.

Don't summarize it with only one sentence.

This book is just rubbish.

I don't want it to be like this.

By the way, the Bible chants

This is my problem and it doesn't make everyone feel happy.

So even while telling stories and giving out dog food, this book is a book mixed with private goods that outputs a large number of personal opinions.

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The review ends!

Disband!
Chapter completed!