Chapter 148 You are so cute
"Big, Miss..."
"Did you know long ago that Mr. Heiyu has something to do with the teacher Qian who wrote it?"
"The power of that tweet is so powerful. Until now, the sales of our Fantasy Paradise Magazine have been driven to double the price!"
"So amazing, Miss!"
Originally, they were not allowed to call them the eldest lady, but it was obvious that everyone in the editorial department was in a very high mood today.
This is the exception.
"Ah?" The intellectual girl called the eldest lady's hand trembled slightly on the edge of the coffee cup.
Canglan Junko looked at the data on the computer screen, and the ranking list of readers' feedback was stunned for a while.
"I, well... I knew it from the beginning." Canglan Junko finally chose to slap her in the face. No one knew about this matter anyway. If she said this, she would be particularly awesome. Why not do it?
I just didn't expect that Teacher Qian would recommend other people's novels, and it was a light novel of their sincere fantasy paradise...
日日日日日日日本. Times have changed.
"It's worthy of being a eldest lady! No wonder you praised this Mr. Heiyu so much at that time. It's true that you have considered it!"
Rainbow Fat was back in the office, and all the editors from the editorial department applauded Canglan Junko.
Canglan Junko could only reply with a somewhat awkward smirk.
...
"So, Heiyu, the novel you wrote is like this..." Wan Lilian nodded as she looked at it. There were some settings she had never heard of before, but after reading it carefully, understanding it, and searching it online, she probably knew it almost.
It’s just that because she has never been involved in light novels, she is still slow to adapt to some elements in it.
Moreover, she did discover that Hei Yu had some things that didn't seem very natural in the use of subjective style, that is, first-person writing.
Because first-person writing is based on one's own perspective, it is very different from the perspective of third-person novel writing.
The biggest difference is.
The third person can write about the feeling of God's perspective.
But the first person is not good.
Because we need to deepen the readers' sense of substitution, everything must be based on the perspective of the real and readers.
I can't say it, and I naturally saw someone on the other side talking.
And you need to add some of your own actions, such as turning your head, turning around, turning sideways, sitting down, etc.
Therefore, compared with the writing of third-person novels, the first person needs to be more delicate and natural.
A sensitivity to the lens is required.
Because this is actually using your own lens to observe the entire novel world.
There is no need to say much about the talent that Wan Lilian showed in this regard. The copywriting written at the beginning of the school year on introducing the campus was very well-designed, and the complexity would be simple, and the simple things would be slightly more pen and ink, so that the overall article could be balanced.
It can be said that as long as readers follow Wan Lilian's words, they can get a complete and immersive experience.
"What you want to change this time is to enter the next chapter of the story, which is independent from the previous chapter."
"So after you modify it, even if the article changes in style, readers should be able to adapt to it." Hei Yu began to analyze the manuscript he wrote.
He sat next to Wan Lilian, looking at the screen very seriously, explaining it line by line.
Although Wan Lilian was a little shy at first, she quickly entered the state afterwards.
When it is time to be ambiguous, it is indeed ambiguous, but when it is time to do things seriously, you must be serious. Being able to distinguish these two different occasions and atmospheres is also considered the specialty of Wan Lilian and Heiyu.
It is precisely because they have always been able to live efficiently and their respective achievements are so excellent.
Of course, there are also the two of them who influence each other, make up for each other, and correct each other, and finally reach their current level.
The two of them carefully revised it together for about four or five hours.
Starting from nine o'clock in the morning, with two hours of rest during the middle, eating, chatting, etc.
When they finished the manuscript, it was already three in the afternoon.
Wan Lilian tapped on the keyboard and when she finished the last part, she felt much more relaxed all over. She moaned habitually and stretched...
But she seemed to have ignored the existence of Hei Yu next to her.
Heiyu looked straight at her cute appearance stretching, like a soft kitten. She stretched herself, and of course, her belly was slightly exposed.
But because Wan Lilian is still too thin, there is basically no meat on her belly, let alone fat or something.
"You, don't, don't look at me like this!" Wan Lilian said shyly, turning the computer chair over.
The tone was a little quick, a little bit of the shame and annoyance before.
"Why?" Heiyu turned the chair over, and looked at Wan Lilian, whose face turned shy, and his shameful face turned red.
"that is…"
"I'm so shy when you look at it..." Wan Lilian's voice was very light, like a mosquito, but Hei Yu could still hear it.
"You are very cute when you are shy, it doesn't matter if I see it, right?" Heiyu looked at her two snow-white thin legs and felt a little charming in his heart. He slowly stood up, approached Wan Lilian and asked.
“Um…”
Big Bad Wolf!
An alarm sounded in Wanli Lian’s heart, but his body could not move.
She could push Heiyu away, but she couldn't bear to let it go.
"Will you bully me again?" When Wan Lilian asked this, she looked adorable, and at the same time, she seemed to have a hint of expectation in her eyes?
"Yes, let me kiss."
Heiyu lowered his head slightly and kissed her again. It was the first time that Wanli Lian kissed her last night. Heiyu was actually very happy, but he didn't show too many expressions at that time.
So naturally, if you kiss me, I will kiss you back too.
This is fairer.
Then, this kiss broke the record again.
About ten seconds.
Because people usually hold their breath when kissing, and with various factors such as nervousness and rapid heartbeat, people can easily get out of breath.
Wan Lilian was like this time, and she could hardly hold on anymore, so she grabbed Heiyu's arm slightly.
Heiyu slowly let go of her, looking at her fair and flawless face, and her beautiful eyes with a little crystal liquid in the blink of an eye.
Heiyu kissed her eyes again.
Wan Lilian seemed to be frightened and quickly closed her eyes.
"You are so cute."
"Liang." Heiyu looked at Wan Lilian and said with a smile.
"Bad, bad guy Hei Yu..." Wan Lilian exhaled with heat, and the girl's fragrance that belonged to her alone.
As soon as the manuscript revision work was completed, this atmosphere became like this.
Therefore, it makes sense that love is not allowed in the office.
Even if these two people are very efficient, they will not be able to do so.
They did not affect their work progress, but what about others?
How many people will not do their job well because of eating this bite of dog food and even lose the job?
Of course, if this company sells lemons, then everything is a different matter.
Chapter completed!