Writing the script was not as fast as everyone thought. It was not until dinner when the boy had just written part of the outline. At the urging of Ania, he was about to write a part of the main text. A few hours after dinner, he finally took out half of the main text of the first part of the story he had imagined.

After handing the draft to Ainya, Luo Yiyi also came up immediately. She had already drawn several paintings, of course, they were all casual paintings. The characters had scenery without exception and were all very magical. However, she was not at all self-conscious and was complacent that she thought it was admirable.

After Luo Yiyi uploaded a painting she had just drawn, she was about to take a break when she saw Ania reading the draft written by the boy and immediately came to join in the fun and prepared to criticize what he wrote.

The story set by the boy is based on the curse of a middle-second disease of a devil in history. After reaching a certain age, the girl will have a certain chance of attacking, thus becoming a middle-second disease, and obtaining the special power derived from the curse "middle-second fantasy world". The protagonist is a student who has a middle-second disease and attending a school that specializes in managing such children.

The first third of the story is a slow-paced daily life, mainly the daily life between the protagonist and several friends she has made. Although there are also fight scenes, most of them are jokes. The biggest one is the sports meeting held by the school to vent the energy of patients with secondary 2 diseases. The story will not appear in the middle of the story. It is believed that the students are prisoners and that they want to rescue them. Some students quickly responded to the call to join them, while the other students did not think they were students. After a long conflict between various adults, the story finally came to an end.

However, the boy had not yet thought about the ending, so he stopped writing it until he was about to reach the ending position. In addition, Ainia urged the boy to start writing the main text directly, and was preparing to think about how to write the ending while writing it.

Of course, the main text of the boy has not been written much. The protagonist's main friends have only appeared two or three, and they have only introduced the level of the worldview.

Neiya and Luo Yiyi were not interested in reading the story outline. In a few minutes, they read the thousands of words in the main text and immediately began to publish their reading notes.

"This won't work."

"Ah?" The words of the teenager were a little confused.

"You are not good at the protagonist, you have no personality at all."

"What kind of personality do you want?" It's okay to tell in detail what's wrong to make the boy calm down. He just found that the problem was corrected. He was most afraid of the kind who kept saying there was a problem but couldn't tell where the problem was.

"You see, the evil-filled type is popular now, I think that's pretty good..."

"But……"

"The gender of this protagonist is not good."

Before the boy could defend himself, he heard the other one start to criticize him.

"Cha?" The boy who heard the criticism clearly became even more confused. "Are you going to let the protagonist of the students besides a girl in girls?"

"Yes, the protagonist is also a girl, it's not that there is no characteristic at all. Since he is the protagonist, of course he has a bit of special nature. For example, only girls have secondary 2 diseases caused by this curse, but the protagonist, as a man, will also have this disease. This will immediately arouse the readers' curiosity."

"If he is a man, how can I explain it?" The confused boy followed the words.

"To put it bluntly, the devil's curse is actually a prank made by a large magic. We can completely say that there is a mysterious organization studying this curse behind the scenes and want to master the power of the 'middle-second world'..."

"You mean that a mysterious organization has successfully studied it, and the protagonist is his test subject?"

"Yes, this can also expand new stories, isn't it?"

"No." After answering silently in his heart, the boy asked, "Do you have anything else to be dissatisfied with?"

"I think the previous contents can be deleted. You just talked about the settings for a long time, and the settings explained in the daily plot are even more boring. For example, the settings can be completely compressed into a few sentences, and then explained in detail at the right time. Moreover, the plot at the beginning is too dull and has no meaning at all. If the beginning of a story cannot attract people, it will undoubtedly fail..."

"What this said makes sense." The boy thought about it and felt that this criticism was very serious and acceptable.

"It's basically that. According to me, I changed the protagonist to a man. It's easy to write at the beginning. In a school full of girls, the protagonist is a man. It's interesting at once and can attract readers. Even if it doesn't cause big conflicts, it's interesting and will make people want to continue watching, wanting to see why the protagonist can enter a girls' school or something like that..."

"...Okay." The boy glanced at the outline at his hand and sighed a long time, "I'll try it."

If we follow the stories that these two children think, then the boy would have to overturn everything they thought before. Although they didn't think about it, it was a fact that what they said was not impactful enough at the beginning. The boy decided to try to modify the previous stories to the extent that the middle and late plots were not changed. At most, the first half would talk about what they imagined, and then develop the stories they thought in the middle and middle stages.

Anyway, this is a script that needs to be made into a game, and at worst it can be made into one or two.

I just agreed to write the story myself, but why did it end up being the case that they made up stories and described the specific plot in detail for them? Is it really necessary for me to write the script myself to exist? Is it possible to spend some money to find a gunman on the Magic Network?

While thinking dissatisfied, the boy threw all the text he had written before into the garbage dump.

"Don't you still need to use the settings inside? Is it okay to just throw them away?"

"I can't use it anymore." If I write according to the plot they gave, many of the parts will conflict and need to be revised. In this regard, those things are indeed unnecessary.

"It's better to compress these settings and put them in the appropriate plot later. Now if you throw them away, are you going to think about it again?" They who have not read the outline were not clear about their proposals that required the teenager to push almost all the stories down and write them again, and still easily put forward various opinions that made the teenager's head angry.

"My memory is not that bad." The boy who was trying hard to think about the plot became a little annoyed when he was criticized.

"Have you ever heard of 'A good memory is not as good as a bad pen'? I kindly remind you that you are just like this tone? Humph, no matter you, let's play games."

There was only a boy left in the room. He could finally calm down and think carefully about how to develop the story more logically, the plot more interesting, and the characters more full.
Chapter completed!