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After ending the conversation with Wenquxing, Zhang Dongjun turned off the computer directly.?

Due to the fierce fight in the morning, Zhang Dongjun was so tired that he went to the bathroom to take a shower, and then lay on the bed and fell asleep.

Time flies. Two days passed in a blink of an eye, and Zhang Dongjun's life was also very monotonous. He protected Lin Qiandai during the day, accompanied her in and out of various occasions, and returned to the villa at night to write desperately.

It was precisely because I followed Lin Qiandai behind two days and was photographed by many paparazzi, which made the headlines.

The title of the headline is: "The most mysterious star in his identity, Zhang Dongjun and Lin Qiandai are inseparable from each other, and they are in pairs."

Ning Zhiyun was furious when she saw this news. After several hours of explanation, Zhang Dongjun stabilized her emotions.

Erlang Shen has been busy writing an outline these days, and he has not taken a few steps to the door, and even Zhang Dongjun can't scream.

Until the early morning of the third day, Erlang Shen pushed open Zhang Dongjun's door with excitement.

"Brother Jun, Brother Jun! I have written the beginning and outline. Please help me take a look!"

Zhang Dongjun was playing chess with Zhou Gong at this time, but was awakened by Erlang Shen's shout. He opened his eyes in a daze, picked up the phone beside him and took a look.

"Erlang Shen, my brother. It's only four o'clock in the morning. Can't we say anything during the day?" Zhang Dongjun said with a resentful look on his face, and then continued to lie on the bed.

"Brother Jun, my outline and the beginning have been written. Please help me see. There are still eight days before the end of the event, and a novel of 100,000 words can be participated in. Time is urgent."

After Erlang Shen finished speaking, he pulled Zhang Dongjun out of the bed.

Zhang Dongjun was really nothing but him, so he had to take the Xianyu phone and start reading.

Zhang Dongjun, who was already a little sleepy, couldn't help but frown when he finished reading Erlang Shen's first chapter.

When he finished reading the second chapter, his face became obviously heavy.

Erlang Shen was beside him, observing Zhang Dongjun's expression. He was also very nervous at this time. After all, this book was about to participate in the competition.

When Zhang Dongjun finished reading Chapter 5, he put down his phone and sighed.

"Brother Jun, what's wrong? Is the novel not written well enough?" Erlang Shen asked impatiently.

"Oh!" Zhang Dongjun just shook his head and didn't say anything.

"Brother Jun, you shook your head and sighed again. What does it mean? I'm so anxious." Erlang Shen was anxious now. He just wanted to know if his novel was well written.

Zhang Dongjun looked at Erlang Shen's appearance and showed a bad smile: "Zhengjun, I can't believe that you wrote this novel, it's completely different."

When Zhang Dongjun finished reading the first chapter of Erlang Shen, he was deeply shocked. Although he had shortcomings, the world constructed in his mind was extremely similar to a certain master of Qidian.

The writing style has also improved a lot, and the plot has changed from being monotonous outside to being rich and colorful.

When the gods in the heavenly court write books, they like to write the protagonist as a genius. Think about it, the gods and immortals are all arrogant and arrogant. The characters in their works must be more powerful. If they write too badly, they may have the best share of them.

Erlang Shen's novel broke the unchanging pattern, and he portrayed the protagonist into a waste, and it was a waste that was too slack to be.

The protagonist was born in a family of cultivation and did not even reach the entry level at the age of sixteen. The protagonist's father made a baby marriage for him before he was born.

In ancient times, a sixteen-year-old man was already adult and could marry and have children. When the wedding date was approaching, he followed his father to propose marriage to the woman's house.

However, the woman who made a marriage to the protagonist is a proud daughter who has few rivals among the younger generation.

Seeing that the protagonist was a waste, she firmly disagreed with marrying the protagonist. She also put aside her bold words and only married the strong in this life.

When the protagonist heard this, he was so angry that he kicked over the dowry and snatched out of the door.

Although this plot is very old-fashioned and is already a mess in the world, I am afraid that only Erlang Shen is the only one who writes this kind of subject, which may cause a craze.

Chapter 2: The protagonist returns to the family and is full of rolling eyes and ridicule. He is not a material for cultivation, and his marriage is rejected. This makes the protagonist decadent and addicted to having fun every day.

One day, when he came to the back mountain of his family to relax, he accidentally picked up a very simple ring. It was because of this ring that the protagonist's life afterwards changed drastically.

When the protagonist returned home, he found that the soul of an old man was hidden in the ring.

Seeing this, he couldn't help but think of the novel by a master of Qidian.

Even Zhang Dongjun doubted whether Erlang Shen had entered the Renjian Qidian.com and secretly read the great god's novel. However, this idea was rejected by him on the spot.

Erlang Shen can't even turn on the computer and give him a keyboard to someone who can't type, how can he enter the Renjian Qidian.com?

Chapter 3 is to use the golden finger to start improving one's own cultivation. Chapter 4 The protagonist begins to take the routine of pretending to be slapping the face.

Erlang Shen wrote five chapters in total, and the words were like flowing water, which made people feel deeply trapped in it. The only drawback is that the fourth chapter is a bit forced to compete, and the plot is a bit stiff, but these are not big problems.

Just modify it, it should be a good book that can be sold in Heaven.

The reason why Zhang Dongjun made a headache expression was deliberately playing tricks on him. Who asked Erlang Shen to wake him up at four o'clock in the morning?

"True Lord, do I have any hope of my book hitting the top ten?" Erlang Shen said excitedly after hearing this.

Zhang Dongjun shrugged and said helplessly: "It's hard to say that there are many good books on Tianjie Qidian.com now. And one book is better than the other. Take He Xiangu for example. Her second novel is more than ten times better than the first one."

"There are also heavenly weapons and alchemy fairy children. Their success is not accidental. If you want to enter the top ten, you must repeatedly ponder and modify it."

"The outline of your book is very good, but what comes to mind is one thing, and writing it out is another thing. Imagination is beautiful, but reality is cruel. The beginning is just a few small problems. As long as you follow the outline, you will have at least 60% chances in the top ten!"

After hearing Zhang Dongjun's words, Erlang Shen nodded seriously.

"Brother Jun, please point out the shortcomings of this book. I can hurry up and modify it." Erlang Shen said pleaded.

Zhang Dongjun nodded and pointed out the areas that needed to be modified, so that Erlang Shen could make good modifications.

Then he looked at the time on his phone, and it was already past five o'clock. He planned to let the little Taoist priest come to protect Lin Qiandai today.
Chapter completed!