I finished the book yesterday and wrote my comments today.

After finishing the book halfway, I am considered a eunuch.

As for this book, you also know that it is more pungent, more poisonous, and more watery. In short, it can be called useless.

In fact, there was a problem with my mentality. I was actually quite hopeful when I opened this book. I discussed it with the editor for a long time after tens of thousands of words at the beginning and changed it seven or eight times. At that time, I thought that even if the grades were bad, they would not be much worse, but I didn’t expect that everyone would like it at the beginning.

The poor grades and many people scolded them, so there were some problems with their mentality. Therefore, after it was put on the shelves, I thought that I would eat it every day after the update. Naturally, the quality was poor and the moisture was high.

I'm sorry to everyone here, I'm sorry for your subscription.

In the article, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is something that everyone doesn’t like. What everyone likes is the scene where the male protagonist slapped the female protagonist in the face after the divorce. This kind of scene is more exciting.

On the premise that the male and female protagonists have no divorce, I know that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is stiff. Because everyone doesn’t like the emotional scenes of the male and female protagonists very much, they simply focus on their careers. Without descriptions, the turning point will naturally be stiff and unreasonable.

Without the turning point, I actually felt a little embarrassed when I wrote the drama of the male and female protagonists myself.

Then there is Jiang Nanxue. I didn’t expect that so many people don’t like this character. This is also a pounce, and I failed to capture everyone’s preferences.

I also analyzed it. I appeared in the early stage, and it was beautiful and focused on the description. People naturally thought that she was the male protagonist's harem. But I actually didn't lean on her to the male protagonist's harem, but I just hoped to write a better supporting role.

I know the outline and I am also a character written by myself, so I naturally have tolerate it much. But when you didn’t know the setting of his character at the beginning, you naturally couldn’t tolerate that much when you were thinking about the male protagonist’s harem.

The protagonist has more strokes and less strokes and supporting roles. Even if you want to rewrite the supporting roles, you should write them after the world is unfolded. This is my problem.

Another problem is the slow pace. This is my common problem. I subconsciously correct it, but I still can't grasp the degree.

As I said, the book is divided into three paragraphs according to the outline, one is one year, one is three years, and the other is five years. Now, after writing a one-year story, it can be considered an imperfect end.

I just hope everyone understands that because of poor grades, I really don’t earn much money every month. In addition to the subsidies for the first three months of the release, it’s too little to rely on royalties alone.

Adults cannot just dream, and I cannot spend more than a year or two years to finish this book with little profit.

Here, I’m sorry to everyone. I’m really sorry. I hope everyone can understand. At the same time, I also thank the book friends who support them all the way, thank you.

in this way.
Chapter completed!