047 Well, I'll just say it(1/2)
After several rounds of eye contact, Taishan laughed.
"Since Teacher Fan doesn't care, then sit down, come on..."
Then he hugged Fan Qingfeng and walked towards the long table.
As these two men sat down, the originally lively table immediately had nothing to say.
Among them, the most nervous one is Li Gefei.
Next to him was the judge who had killed the wild dog.
Opposite him is the wild dog himself.
What's even more terrifying is that next to the wild dog is a land mine called Jiangbo.
Eat quickly, run after eating...
This is Ansi's only idea.
On the other side, Shana, as the leader of the card, asked with a tough bullet and: "Teacher Fan, what direction is your new work in about it?"
"Well... it is a time-travel work." Fan Qingfeng gestured in a very sensible way, "A person has based himself on the present and looks forward to the future after experiencing countless events of the destruction of dynasties."
"Oh!" Shana nodded seriously and said, "It's very... very in line with the trend of online literature. Teacher Fan's feeling is really keen."
"Where is it? For online literature, I just read a few books in the previous short review." Fan Qingfeng slapped his lips and smiled at his left and right, "But I do have some intuitions in writing. Don't the people like to watch various time travel? I will use my way to travel through time, so that they can feel the heaviness of history and cherish the present and the future more."
Li Yan basically didn't listen to the following words.
His whole mind stopped at the four words "short review".
Is it him?
Li Yan stopped chopsticks without realizing it and looked quietly.
I silently see this guy who talks about it and is nonsense.
It's him.
It's only him.
very good.
This is very good.
If it was denied by such a stupid person.
Then I have nothing to regret.
"Cough..." Li Gefei saw that Li Yan was wrong, so he hurriedly leaned over and whispered, "Eat first... and explain it to you."
"It's okay." Li Yan smiled and continued to lower his head to eat, "I won't cause trouble for the coach."
Fan Qingfeng on the opposite side became more and more excited.
"When it comes to short essay contests, those award-winning works are actually of limited level..."
"Entertainment is so simple, so I can only compare the idea."
"By the way, are you still writing about the killing of Tokyo?"
As soon as these words were spoken, the whole audience's hands that were picking up food paused.
Only Taishan looked at Li Gefei as if he didn't understand anything: "How about the wild dog? Is it done?"
"It's finished." Li Gefei didn't dare to raise his head, so he could only lower his head and eat hard.
"It's done!" Fan Qingfeng smiled, "I shouldn't write such a work."
He didn't know that Li Yan on the opposite side had already gritted his teeth.
Tolerate……
I'm just an Lv.1, don't cause trouble for the editor...
However……
"What's the situation?" Jiangbao looked at Li Yan blankly, then at Fan Qingfeng, "The wild dog is sitting here, who are you?"
This time, not only did he pause, but the chopsticks in Xiaogao's hand fell directly to the ground.
You know what Gannini’s sauce is like!
Li Yan didn't have time to think about it anymore, so he immediately wiped his mouth and stood up: "I'll eat, teachers will talk."
Seeing that he was about to leave, Fan Qingfeng raised his hand and said with a smile: "You wrote the Tokyo Killing?"
???
Li Yan's expression froze, and then he became ruthless.
Not finished?
"Oh!" Taishan smiled and waved his hand, "Isn't this a coincidence? Come on, come on, come on, sit down, and listen to Teacher Fan's opinions."
Seeing Taishan reacting like this, Li Gefei was completely stupid.
Where is your emotional intelligence? What about your emotional intelligence?
Li Gefei had no time to care, so he quickly turned his eyes to Shana for help.
Mr. Na quickly rescues!
But Shana seemed to have seen nothing, and she smiled and pressed her hands at Li Yan: "Sit down, Teacher Fan's advice, it's a rare opportunity."
Mr. Na???
Li Gefei wanted to cry but no tears. I am the only one in the world who understands it?
However, to Li Yan's hearing, Shana's words were full of bad smell.
He pondered for a while and finally sat back.
When Fan Qingfeng saw the young man turn around, he was naturally satisfied, so he raised his hand and generously guided him.
"I read your book, but my writing style is actually quite good."
"But the idea, description and plot are very wrong."
"I feel like watching RB cartoons."
“Those are very perverted things.”
"If you really like RB culture and learn Edogawa Ranbu, it would be okay to have popular works like Kurosawa Akira."
"As for games, it's even more modern spiritual opium."
"Together these things together can indeed attract some people with lower aesthetics."
"But this is a wrong way, kid."
"Not only will your own thoughts go wrong, but you will also lead readers, especially young readers."
"Writing is to carry the way, and it is to carry the right way."
"Um."
"I'll put these words here."
"If you go back and taste it well, you will definitely make progress."
“…”
Li Yan trembled with pressure, and wanted to nod, and said, "I understand."
But this time, my head was frozen in its original place and could not lower it any longer.
As a realist, you should obey power and not let the editors be embarrassed.
But fuck.
Even if it is a dog, it will bite people if it is anxious.
Seeing the wild dog struggling so much, Shana hurriedly said, "It's okay, wild dog, art appreciation is a very subjective thing. If you have any opinions on Teacher Fan's guidance, you can also give me some feedback."
Li Yan's face shook.
real?
Shana nodded.
real.
Li Yan raised his head.
Then, I'll just say it.
Shana's mouth grinned and her tiger teeth showed off.
Bite him.
Just as a pressure cooker slashed the air valve, Li Yan jumped up in this breath.
"Teacher Fan." Li Yan suddenly turned around and looked at Fan Qingfeng with a respectful look. "I should agree with the corrections from my seniors, but I don't know if you can let me say a few real thoughts."
To be continued...