At 9:30 that night, as soon as the writing was finished, Li Yan sent the manuscript to Lin Shanpu, which would save one minute or one minute.

It doesn't matter that he drags it until very late, but he knows that as long as he doesn't publish the original manuscript, Lin Shanpu will definitely not sleep.

Sure enough, Lin Shanpu also replied "received" immediately.

Only after seeing these two words did Li Yan dare to take a shower.

Accompanied by the sound of water, the plot in his mind gradually became smoother.

For the development of the plot, the female partner "Hoshino Chimi" is sacrificed, which is the legendary plot killing.

However, most mature authors or screenwriters will have some preparation before offering sacrifices. As Chen Yu said, it shows the complexity of the characters and builds strong emotions...

Therefore, old bookworms and old drama fans can basically smell the smell of plot killing at the first time.

Like a wild dog, there is no choice for the plot, but a few people suddenly kill you.

It’s the kind of person you read well, and when you turn the page, you will be exiled to the point of being a living person.

This has gained good results.

After all, everyone knows that this is a short story and is prepared for the inexplicable development.

What Li Yan has to do next is to bring the story back on track and reconstruct the relationship between the male and female protagonists.

In fact, there was no word between the male and female protagonists in the whole story.

The victim is ignorant of everything, and only the invisible guard is silently guarding.

All relationships are established only through observation and eyes.

Just saying nothing, just by secret observation, letting the heroine stand up, which is also what Li Yan thinks is the coolest part of the whole story.

But from the feedback, many readers have opinions about this. Maybe they are so anxious, or maybe they can't stand the male protagonist's silent efforts, which has led to Li Yan's most proud point and the point with the most negative feedback.

Otherwise, let the heroine discover the male protagonist's spy in the mirror and let them interact?

Li Yan wrapped himself in a towel and walked out of the bathroom, and the plot behind him had emerged.

It's just that he's not sure it's interesting.

In the past, wild dogs would never consider readers' opinions, but after Anxi's suggestions and trying to "correct the plot", he unknowingly began to pay attention to this matter.

In order to retain readers and appropriately improve writing styles, it is a must-see path to becoming a professional writer.

It is better to try to write it again when Lin Shanpu returns the work.

Li Yan quickly wiped his jade body and sat back in front of the computer. He turned on the screen and found that Jiumu had just replied.

[Jiumu: Since you asked, I will just say it.]

[Around Chapter 20, you wrote the protagonist as a scumbag.]

[Indeed, the protagonist confessed to Qianmei to protect the heroine, and it is OK to have a fake relationship.]

[But in the subsequent development of the story, you portray Qianmei too well, but the heroine has no pen and ink, so this is already a mistake.]

[But you didn't realize that you regarded the detour as the main line and actually made the protagonist and Qianmei together.]

【This is called collapse.】

[I saw you solved this error with plot killing and forced the protagonist back to the main line.]

[But before that, you have lost readers who can't stand the scumbag, and you have also lost readers who can't stand the goal and the main line is unclear.]

【That's it, I went to sleep, I didn't have to go back.】

Li Yan carefully read every word.

This criticism is naturally reasonable and is exactly the same as Anxi's opinion.

However, Jiumu restored this mistake from the author's perspective and became even more incisive.

At the same time, Li Yan also felt a completely different creative idea from himself.

Jiumu, perhaps the kind of author who calculates the whole story and completely controls the plot.

I originally thought "I Become the Cat in a Horror Story" should be the stream of inspiration, and the contrast is very large.

After further reading and savoring, Li Yan typed and thanked him.

[Wild Dog: Thank you for your guidance, it's very correct. Later, I plan to strengthen the shaping of the heroine and arrange interactions.]

He thought Jiumu had already slept, but who knew she would reply in an instant.

[Jiumu: Interaction? Did I say they need interaction? Why don’t you insist on using side descriptions to shape characters?]

[Wild Dog: I just want to arrange some simple conversations, and many readers complain that the heroine has never even said anything.]

[Jiumu: Very good. Do what they said and persuade readers who like the heroine in the end to give up.]

【Wild Dog: (sweaty head)】

[Jiumu:...Is the above sentence very offensive?]

【Wild Dog: Fortunately (wiping sweat)】

It's more than offense.

If I hadn't been prepared for it, I'd probably have been shooting the keyboard a long time ago.

[Jiumu: They always say that I have low EQ... It's really troublesome.]

[If you offend it, just offend it. Anyway, I have abandoned the book "Screen Killing" anyway.]

[Tell me the last point, you decide whether to adopt it yourself.]

[Readers' opinions are just their instantaneous emotional expression.]

[Specifically, the heroine does not speak, and the hero and heroine lack direct interaction.]

[The male protagonist is an invisible guardian who understands and protects the female protagonist through a series of distant and romantic behaviors.]

[The image of the heroine is purely shaped by expressions, actions and behaviors.]

[This unconventional and somewhat mysterious feeling is the core reason why I like "Tokyo Script Kill".]

[And I can feel that you have something hidden in the heroine, but occasionally exposed some clues, which is also a big source of my expectation.]

[Those readers who complained are not opposed to "the heroine does not speak", but are anxious and eager to see the truth, and want the hero to get rewards for their efforts.]

[But the tone of this work's establishment must be delayed satisfaction.]

【Listen to those emotional opinions will only make the story and characters fade instantly.】

[As for those readers whose opinions are satisfied, they will soon be bored and silently abandon the book.]

【Unlike when complaining, they can’t say a word when abandoning the book.】

[This is the second type of collapse, and it is caused by readers.]

【The above is a compensation for my two offenses.】

【Wild Dog: It's three times.】

【Jiumu: Hum?】

[Wild Dog: You just said that you have abandoned the book, and this one is even more offensive than the previous ones.]

【Jiumu:…】

[Jiumu: If there is a new book, I will help you read it... compensate for it once more.]

oh?

Wouldn't that be offended several times?

As a teacher of emotional intelligence, he will only have more and more debts.

After finishing the conversation with Jiumu, Li Yan savored it from beginning to end.

At the end of the taste, my mind felt like "enlightenment".

Just imagine, if many readers cannot tolerate the core setting of "not relying on dialogue to shape relationships", then how do the achievements of the works come from now?

They must be so anxious that they can't help but complain.

For the author, this is exactly the feedback you wrote correctly.

Following these feedbacks and forcibly reverse them and falling into clichés will only make the work lose its highlight.

As for readers who feel bored and abandon the book later, most of them just feel that the story becomes boring, and there is no reason or the mood to point out this mistake.

The only thing left to the author in the end is the result of the data decline.

Um……

The taciturn heroine is originally the core setting involved in the final answer.

I can only approach him with distant observation.

Keep believing in yourself in this regard.

We must also trust those readers who read books silently.

Their reading is the best affirmation of this setting.

As for Jiumu, it can be seen that she has suffered many losses and it took a long time to summarize this.

It's really too generous.

It would be great if one day I was so strong that I could share my writing experience.

At that time, we must use more guiding opinions to give back to the EQ elder sister and the Fish Eater Brother.

If possible, share it with your favorite new author like them.

good!

There are two weeks left before the award results, and only three weeks left before the completion of the book.
Chapter completed!