Chapter 86 The woman who lives an idiot’s life
The next day, Li Miao, who was returning from his morning jog, stopped in front of Su Rou's house.
Tuk-tuk-tuk...
Knocking gently on the door.
"Who?"
Su Rou's alert voice came from inside the room.
Li Miao said: "Miss Su, it's me."
There was a "clang" sound in the house, and after a while, Su Rou appeared in front of Li Miao, and then introduced Li Miao into the house.
Today she is wearing a light green dress, which looks very suitable for her temperament.
After taking a sip of tea handed over by Su Rou, Li Miao asked straight to the point: "Miss Su, how is the revision of your novel going?"
As soon as she mentioned this, Su Rou showed a nice smile and said, "Master Li, according to your suggestion, I changed everything yesterday. Please take a look."
After saying that, she handed the latest edition of the novel to Li Miao.
Well, it is indeed much better than yesterday.
After just reading the first few paragraphs, Li Miao nodded secretly.
At least, there is some desire to keep reading.
Half an hour later, Su Rou asked nervously: "Master Li, how are you?"
"Hmm."
Li Miao nodded affirmatively and said with a smile: "It's much better than yesterday, but there are still some problems."
After hearing the first half of the sentence, Su Rou breathed a sigh of relief in her heart, and a joyful emotion arose spontaneously. When she heard the second half of the sentence, her heart lifted again.
I only heard Li Miao say: "First, Miss Su, have you noticed that your leading role is a little less?"
Su Rou thought for a while and agreed: "Now that I think about it, my protagonist's role is indeed reduced. Mr. Li, do you mean to delete other people's roles?"
"Not bad."
Li Miao said: "At the beginning, it is best to use the pen and ink on the protagonist, and the development of the plot should be promoted from the protagonist. Of course, it does not mean that other characters cannot be written, but it is best to put them in a later position.
This will enrich the plot."
"Secondly, your main plot, if I'm not wrong, should be about the love story between a scholar and a lady from a wealthy family. The wealthy family didn't agree with it at first, but after many difficulties and tests, the two finally became friends.
People still walked together and lived an exciting and happy life."
Su Judao: "Master Li, you are right. I really want to write a similar story. Is there any problem?"
Li Miao said: "There is nothing wrong with the story, but it is too cliche. Not to mention nine out of ten novels out there, at least eight out of ten are this type of novel. With such a routine, readers
I’m basically tired of reading it. Miss Su, do you think the novel you wrote can stand out among so many novels of the same type?"
Su Rou opened her mouth slightly, intending to say that as long as I write well, I can stand out, but in the end she shook her head.
"Then... Mr. Li, what do you think we should do?"
Su Rou looked at Li Miao for help.
Li Miao smiled faintly and said: "Be new and different."
"Unconventional?"
Su Rou looked at him in confusion.
Li Miao said: "That's right, something new and different. For example, the lady from a wealthy family in your novel has a twist. In fact, she is not a human, but a female ghost."
"Ah?"
Su Rou exclaimed slightly.
I saw that Li Miao continued: "The main line of your story can be changed to a love story between a poor scholar and a female ghost. A poor scholar who failed in the examination was on his way home, passing by the barren mountains, when he suddenly saw a
In the ancient house, there was a beautiful sound of the piano coming from the depths of the ancient house. The scholar entered the ancient house with curiosity and saw a very beautiful woman sitting in front of the ancient house..."
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That's right, Li Miao was telling the story of Ning Caichen and Nie Xiaoqian. Of course, he didn't tell it in detail, just a general outline.
Love stories between humans and ghosts are no longer unusual in novels of the 21st century, but in this era, have you ever heard of love stories between humans and ghosts?
As you can imagine, you can tell something about Su Rou's appearance right now.
"Miss Su, how do you feel?" Li Miao said confidently.
Su Rou came back to her senses from the content of the story and said to Li Miao: "Master Li, your story is so impactful that people can't help but fall into it. I dare say that if it were written into a book,
Novels are bound to be popular for a while."
Li Miao smiled and said: "If that's the case, I'm really looking forward to Miss Su writing it."
Su Rou said in surprise: "Master Li, you mean to leave this story to me to write?"
Li Miao said: "This is a matter of course, otherwise why would I tell you."
"But..."
Su Rou looked troubled: "Master Li, this is your story and creativity..."
Before she could finish speaking, Li Miao interrupted her and said: "Actually... I no longer plan to write novels in the future. No matter how good the ideas and stories are, someone must write them out and then give them to
People have to appreciate it, otherwise it's all in vain. So, Miss Su, you don't have to worry about this at all. I even thank you for writing this story down."
At the first moment, he actually wanted to say that the story and idea were not his, but when he thought about it, he might have to explain where he got it from, which would be even more troublesome, so he immediately changed his mind and shamelessly admitted that it was his.
Stories and creativity.
Su Rou was moved, and she said solemnly: "In this way, this little lady will definitely live up to your expectations, Mr. Li."
She had this idea in her mind. After she earned money from the novels she wrote in the future, she would give the bulk of the money to Mr. Li, and she would only need to get some hard-earned money.
Gugu...
When Li Miao was about to say that there was no need to be so solemn, his stomach refused to give him face.
Li Miao: "..."
Su Rou was stunned for a moment, then she chuckled and said, "Master Li, I haven't had breakfast yet, and I'm planning to do it later. Master Li, if you don't mind, why don't you stay and eat together?"
Li Miao didn't hesitate and said: "If so, then it will be troublesome for Miss Su."
There are some noodles and an egg placed on the kitchen stove. It can be seen that Su Rou plans to cook noodles this morning.
Now that there was one more person, Li Miao, Su Rou took out some more noodles and an egg.
Li Miao originally wanted to help, but Su Rou refused because there was a saying that guests should help.
So, Li Miao had no choice but to sit aside and watch Su Rou perform.
Obviously, Su Rou rarely entered the kitchen before, and she even accidentally burned her hand when the fire broke out.
It's so cute and beautiful to see her looking embarrassed and gently blowing her finger while her index finger was burned.
But... Li Miao couldn't help but have a doubt in her heart: Is she sure she can really cook the noodles well and make them delicious?
When he saw her pouring oil into the pot and hiding far away, Li Miao could no longer sit still.
"Ahem..."
Li Miao coughed a few times, stood up, and said to Su Ju tactfully: "Miss Su, leave it to me to cook the noodles. You go and record the stories and ideas I just told. I'm afraid you'll have to wait.
I accidentally forgot about it."
"Then I'll trouble Mr. Li."
Chapter completed!