It’s another weekend.

Wang Zihao went back to his home in Jinhu Mansion in Hexi Province, where he ate and drank.

His current relationship with Liu Qianqian is a bit delicate, and there is a girl in his heart who is fighting against his ex-girlfriend.

It’s just that I live in a rental house on the east side of Hedong, and my ex-girlfriend always has the upper hand.

It will be better if you go home.

Last week, Wang Zihao was still in high spirits when he and Ma Tengfei were sitting on the Taohua Island Musical Fountain Square.

This week, he languished and sat there in a daze, watching the sky gradually darken.

It took nine days, more than 40,000 words, and still no shortcomings.

"Haohao, to be honest, you are extremely talented..." Ma Tengfei handed a cigarette to Prince Hao, who seemed to be hopeless.

Ma Tengfei has been reading "Shading the Sky" written by Wang Zihao and would like to give some opinions.

But except for the first chapter, the protagonist did not have this kind of overturning beginning. In the following chapters, Ma Tengfei didn't know how to give advice.

He feels that his best friend is really talented, the world framework setting is very powerful, the plot design is fascinating, the overall momentum is majestic, and the characters are also very vivid...

The only shortcoming, and also the most heartbreaking part, is that the opening chapter is too anti-market.

It's like a beautiful woman, although she is peerless and independent, but she comes from an ordinary background, is divorced and has three sons.

Any man who wants to marry this beautiful woman will probably think twice after learning about it, or even turn around and run away.

"Stop talking, I will update another chapter tonight and it will be 50,000 words." Wang Zihao was very depressed.

There was no sign in, and it was published directly. After 30,000 words, there was no shortcut, so many old authors cut it off without hesitation.

Because when this number is reached, there will be several editors cross-reviewing the manuscript.

If an editor is not optimistic about it, there may be a chance of making a mistake.

Several editors are not optimistic about it, and the probability of making mistakes is almost zero.

"How about changing the beginning again?" He lit a cigarette for Brother Tie, and Ma Tengfei lit one for himself.

In addition to this suggestion, Ma Tengfei is embarrassed to give other suggestions on writing.

Because he felt that he could not guide Wang Zihao, so it was better not to let others down.

"I don't know how to change it." Wang Zihao sighed, "Why is it that "Shading the Sky" is not adapted to the environment here?

Songs like "A Diao" and "Girl by the Bridge" wouldn't be acclimated here, right?

Then it's over.

Isn't it because of his "musical talent" that Liu Qianqian pursues him?

If he had no musical talent, let alone Liu Qianqian, not even the divorced young woman with two children downstairs would look down on him.

"It is really painful to change the article. It is like operating on your own child. If you are not careful, you will die or become disabled." Ma Tengfei understands it deeply.

"Aside from the problems in the first chapter, are there any other problems later?" Wang Zihao humbly asked Ma Tengfei.

"Later..." After hesitating, Ma Tengfei said: "It's very impressive. I can't fault it. At least with my level, I'm not qualified to make irresponsible remarks."

After a pause, Ma Tengfei exclaimed: "How about the first chapter? After reading the following chapters, I think there is nothing wrong with it. It is necessary to set up the plot. The problem is that you are a newcomer. Being poor is the original sin."
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Wang Zihao nodded silently.

If you are born poor, whatever you do will be wrong. Before you become a rich man, no matter how hard you work, you will not be doing your job properly.

The rich second generation goes to the island to go on yachts and have parties, spending tens of millions, which is called enjoying life.

If you were born into a poor family and spend hundreds of dollars on restaurants, that’s called spending money.

"Then I have to write another book." Wang Zihao sighed.

Cut?

Ma Tengfei felt a little heartbroken. He had never supported his best friend to take this path before.

But now, he is very supportive.

The beginning of the book "Shading the Sky" is really amazing. The best friend is a person with extraordinary talents.

"It's possible... If you don't insist anymore, you can apply for a contract with 100,000 words." Ma Tengfei doesn't want to see his best friend's talent stifled.

If Wang Zihao starts a new book, he will most likely become timid and hesitant, and his writing talent will be restricted by the so-called framework.

"Is the success rate of actively applying for a contract high?" Wang Zihao asked.

Ma Tengfei was embarrassed and said: "I don't know this either. I haven't studied it and I haven't seen anyone say it."

"Then let's change to another book and capture the essence of the three golden chapters at the beginning." Wang Zihao planned to change to another book.

After hesitating for a moment, Ma Tengfei, who is also writing a book at Qiyue, said: "I now have some readers. When I go back tonight, I will recommend the chapter to you. I originally wanted to wait for you to sign the contract before I promote it."

Wang Zihao suddenly became energetic: "Is it effective?"

"One thing. In the past, even though I had bad grades, I still insisted on finishing the book normally, and the readers' stickiness was higher than that of most writers. But I don't write fantasy themes, so the effect of chapter promotion may be poor." Ma Tengfei said regretfully.

"Forget it, I haven't even signed the contract. If I write hundreds of thousands of words and don't show up, it will be cut off. It will affect the reputation you have accumulated with great effort." After careful consideration, Wang Zihao rejected Brother Tie's kindness.

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"It doesn't matter, it won't have much impact. You know it for sure. Think of it as the book I brought to me as a sacrifice to heaven. It can increase good luck." Ma Tengfei said with a smile.

Wang Zihao shook his head: "No need, I have new inspiration. I will start working on a new book when I get back in the evening. I am not in a hurry this time. I will send it to you after I finish it. If you think it is feasible, I will submit it first."

"Have you given up on "Shading the Sky"?" Ma Tengfei expressed regret.

"Well, you have to be down-to-earth as a person. Only by solving life problems can you be qualified to talk about dreams." Wang Zihao said.

It's a pity, but Brother Tie is right. Ma Tengfei said: "Okay, you only need to write 10,000 words for your new book first, and 10,000 words will be included."

Wang Zihao went to a nearby vending machine and bought two bottles of drinks. He handed one bottle to Ma Tengfei, and then the two of them walked around Peach Blossom Island.

While walking and chatting, Ma Tengfei suddenly pointed to a place on the opposite side of the island, his eyes shining: "Haohao, do you remember that place?"

Wang Zihao looked up: "Where?"

"That community with many villas is like the language of the wind." Ma Tengfei looked envious.

"Oh, remember, what's wrong?" Wang Zihao unscrewed the drink bottle and took another sip of the drink.

Ma Tengfei lowered his voice slightly: "Do you still remember our music teacher in the third year of high school?"

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Liu Qianqian?

Wang Zihao was stunned and said: "Remember, how could I not remember the youth of all the boys in Taohua Lake Middle School?"

Back then, Ma Tengfei told Wang Zihao that Liu Qianqian lived in Fengzhiyu Community.

Ma Tengfei smiled and said: "Teacher Liu still lives in Wind Language and is still working as a teacher in our Taohua Lake Middle School."

Wang Zihao nodded: "In five years, Teacher Liu has never thought about changing schools. You can only get a salary increase by changing jobs. It's really stupid."

Hearing Brother Tie's words, Ma Tengfei's face changed slightly, he looked around and whispered: "Haohao, please keep your voice down, Teacher Liu often comes to Peach Blossom Island for walks."

Wang Zihao was surprised: "You know all this?"

Ma Tengfei said slightly proudly: "Don't you pay much attention to the class group? From time to time, some classmates say that they met Teacher Liu again on Peach Blossom Island and were so happy."

Later, he explained that every year when the peach blossoms bloom, many students, regardless of gender, come to Peach Blossom Island, not to see the peach blossoms, but just to meet Teacher Liu, because she comes to enjoy the flowers very frequently during this season.
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"How happy is it to meet by chance?" Wang Zihao was not very interested. In the past, he might have looked forward to seeing Liu Qianqian again like some of his classmates.

Now, it's too late for him to hide.

"Huh?" Ma Tengfei was surprised. When it came to Teacher Liu, Brother Tie shouldn't have reacted like this.

Back then, Brother Tie was also a supporter of Teacher Liu.

Teacher Liu is the goddess in the eyes of students of Taohua Lake Middle School.

She is beautiful, has good temperament, pure face and smile, and kills countless boys and girls instantly.

I heard that after she returned to Shacheng from Yanjing after graduation, several suitors from Yanjing came after her, which shows how terrifying her lethality is.

"Haohao, I'm talking about Teacher Liu, why did you react like this?" Ma Tengfei asked in confusion.

Wang Zihao could only say: "Girls like Teacher Liu should not exist in the world. I have figured it out and no longer want to be her fan or a wanderer."

Ma Tengfei was surprised: "Haohao, you didn't want to take advantage of Teacher Liu before, did you? Only in that way would you have such despair and then rebel."

Wang Zihao seemed to have heard some other information and asked: "Is there any classmate in the class who had that idea and then became desperate? Which one is it?"

"It's not from our class, it's from another class taught by Teacher Liu. I repeated the class for Teacher Liu. After I went to college, I wanted to chase Teacher Liu and almost had my legs broken." Ma Tengfei is a creative person and is very gossipy, collecting things everywhere.

Material.

"Who hit him?" Wang Zihao had not heard Liu Qianqian say this and asked curiously: "Teacher Liu?"
To be continued...