Xu Xin doesn’t think there is any problem with Yu Zhen’s earnest expectations.

Because he felt the other person's responsibility for his students as a teacher reflected in the details.

Therefore, he readily made the promise.

"No problem, Teacher Yu, don't worry!"

Take it seriously.

But a promise is a promise:

"Then why do I only give this movie 70 points!"

"...Haha, you kid."

Yu Zhen actually admires the students' persistence.

Newborn calves are not afraid of tigers.

So, she smiled and said:

"Okay, then I will talk to you from the perspective of a member of the Tianchao Film Association and a professional practitioner. I don't want to talk about the advantages. OK, let's just discuss the disadvantages."

"OK."

"Well, let's talk about the shots first. Let me give you the simplest example. At your ending, did you give the audience a clear time span?"

Xu Xin was stunned.

Yu Zhen looked at her student's expression, recalled the last scene in her mind, and said:

"Look, the climax of your story is actually at the end. Through the phone call with your mother, you expressed to the audience that today is actually your birthday, but no one cares. And the only person who cares about you called you.

After you answered the phone, you were obviously working hard to accompany the client, but you still wanted to lie to your mother and say that you were very happy. This actually reflects the many workers who work hard in this city.

And there is an open ending, that is, the fifty yuan. In fact, I can see your ingenious idea from it. But let me ask you, if this thing really arouses the empathy of the audience, then do you feel sleepy for five minutes?

Being woken up and sleeping on the freezing cold street for an hour or two with no one to care about you, or being woken up again by your mother’s phone call wishing you a happy birthday. Which of these two will arouse the emotions of the audience more?”

"Of course it's the latter."

"What you want to express in your script is the latter, right?"

"Um."

"But you didn't show it, and you didn't show the time span shots. Either you deliberately hid it for the audience to dig deeper, or you simply omitted it. You were negligent here, right?"

"..."

Xu Xin pursed his lips speechlessly.

Indeed, he was negligent here.

After thinking for a while, he said:

"Then this needs to be supplemented. The best way is to use a blurry shooting method to take a picture of the electronic clock in the KTV, and then... maybe you can supplement the time signal of Yanjing time in the taxi?"

"clever."

Looking at the students' inferences, Yu Zhen showed a satisfied look.

Xu Xinze quickly picked up the notebook on the table, scrawled an article on it with a pen, raised his head and asked:

"anything else?"

You are thirsty for talents.

But Yu Zhen did not continue, but asked jokingly:

"Should points be deducted?"

"..."

Looking at the teacher with a wicked face, Xu Xin felt a little embarrassed.

But he still nodded:

"Should."

"Hmm...how much will be deducted?"

"...You also have specific numerical values?"

"You are so serious, why can't the teacher be more serious?"

"..."

Looking at the teacher's joking eyes, Xu Xin sighed helplessly.

"Teacher Yu."

"Um?"

"Older gingers are more spicy."

"Teacher, I'm not old yet. Thank you~... I just said this to you, so I'll deduct ten points for now."

"..."

Ginger is indeed spicy.

But the most difficult things to raise are indeed villains and women...

…

Xu Xin stayed at Yu Zhen's house until the afternoon before leaving.

I also had a meal at noon.

When I left, the editing was finalized.

The deputy dean of the directing department said, naturally there will be some instructors who are junior students in the film and television production department who are willing to let the students come and practice.

At that time, Xu Xin can personally participate.

Even including post-production dubbing, Yu Zhen also found the right school personnel for him, so that he wouldn't be like a headless fly when the time comes.

Furthermore, he asked Teacher Yu if he knew the person selling the equipment.

He plans to buy some equipment and clear out an empty room at home to use as an editing room and screening room.

Yu Zhen was not familiar with this aspect, but she helped him call the person in charge of Beijing Film Tube Equipment. After some communication, she got the phone number of the person in charge of a dealer that specializes in selling equipment.

The next step is Xu Xin's own business.

After leaving Teacher Yu's house, he didn't go anywhere else.

The world of feasting and feasting seemed to be far away from him all of a sudden, so he drove his car to the gym and continued to exercise.

The plan that coach Yu Fei made for him was a muscle-building plan, and he felt that his body was a little too thin.

Although her body proportions are excellent, she has no butt or pectoralis major.

The joke was that "it can't give women the feeling of bursting with hormones." Although Xu Xin scoffed, he was a professional after all.

Build muscle, build muscle.

Although I don’t want the muscles to be so exaggerated, if I take off my clothes and have a standard 2+6 figure, won’t my future partner also scream?

He was just tired of vulgarity and wanted to find a girl who matched his temperament and appetite. He didn't want to become a monk.

After practicing for more than an hour, the coach who had given private lessons to other members just came out of the training room and saw him.

Perhaps she was pleased with Xu Xin's perseverance and her aerobic training in addition to planning, or maybe she was maintaining a good relationship with customers and was much stronger than an ordinary woman. She came over and talked to Xu Xin.

Xin chatted for a while.

"...You've already run five kilometers?"

"Um."

Xu Xin, who was sweating on his forehead, nodded:

"It's not running, it's walking briskly. My legs are still very sore today, so I don't plan to train today. I just came here to sweat~"

"Yeah, persistence and self-discipline are very good qualities."

I don’t know whether it was a compliment or a sincere statement, but after she finished speaking, she added:

"However, I just did high-intensity training in the novice stage yesterday, and I ran another five kilometers. My suggestion is that I take you to do some flexibility recovery training. If your training intensity is too high in the novice stage, it may

It will cause unnecessary damage. How?"

"Um... don't you want to take up your time, coach?"

"No delay, I don't have class until 7:30 p.m. Let's go?"

"good."

Coach Yu Fei helped him adjust several slower and slower frequencies on the treadmill, and after lowering Xu Xin's breathing to almost smoothness, she took him to the training room.

Coincidentally, two people walked out of the training room facing the equipment area.

Two women.
To be continued...