Chapter 89 I am sincere to you (4)

Author: Qi Yao

Chapter 89 I am sincere to you (4)

Only then did Xu Yingcai come back to his senses.

He gave Yuan Yao a warning look, then quickly smiled and said to Xie Rong, "Yes, yes, what's wrong with Teacher Xie?"

Xie Rong raised the script in Yang's hand, "About Lu Yi's emotional change and Xu Zhen's ending, it's a bit illogical."

Xu Yingcai was stunned.

Xie Rong opened the script in his hand, pointed at a few places he had marked in red, and analyzed, "Before Lu Yi met Xu Zhen, he was a brother-in-law, and after recommending Xu Zhen to Lu Ye,

Being happy because Xu Zhen has made a meritorious service shows that Lu Ye has a high position in her heart. But after Xu Zhen was imprisoned, she did not ask Lu Ye to confirm Xu Zhen's identity at all, and took it upon herself to help him escape, betraying

The brother figure seems to be unable to stand."

"Similarly, Xu Zhen was an important figure in the early stage, but after Lu Yi died, he only appeared for a few seconds in the final battle, and was not a key figure in triggering the battle. His role was not very important, and he was not explained in the end.

The ending.”

Xu Yingcai suddenly hesitated and said, "Although Lu Yi is set up to be a brother-controller, she is also a love brain, so I think there is no problem with her behavior. However, Xu Zhen is indeed a bug. I will ask the screenwriter to change it."

"

Xie Rong listened to Xu Yingcai's explanation, closed the script in his hand, but suddenly glanced at Yuan Yao who was looking curious, with a slight smile on his lips, "Although there is no big problem, there is a person here.

Suggestions on making Lu Yi’s character more fleshed out. I wonder if Director Xu is willing to listen to it.”

When Xu Yingcai heard this, he immediately forgot about whether his niece was qualified for the job, and said with bright eyes, "Of course! What suggestions does Teacher Xie have?"

Xie Rong's eyes fell on the four characters "City of Smoke" on the cover of the script. He paused for a few seconds before saying, "While helping Xu Zhen escape, Lu Yi discovered that he was indeed an undercover agent and fell into the trap of his family.

The dilemma with her lover. When Lu Ye caught up with them, Lu Yi made the final decision in the midst of collapse. Killing Xu Zhen and then committing suicide for love not only fulfilled her love, but also preserved her family ties."

Xu Yingcai was stunned.

Yuan Yao didn't understand why his role in the drama suddenly increased.

And it has become more complicated.

Originally, she only had to play the role of a big-breasted and brainless young lady, but now she has to go deeper into the character's mind.

So she pulled Xu Yingcai's arm with some tears in her eyes and begged pitifully, "Uncle, can't you just change it?"

Xu Yingcai is now immersed in his own work. He doesn't care about Yuan Yao's opinion at all. He just comforts him perfunctorily, "Yao Yao, uncle knows that this is a bit difficult for you, but you think, if you perform well,

You can definitely become famous in one fell swoop! No one will dare to look down on you in the future!"

Yuan Yao: "."

Yuan Yao wants to say that she doesn't want to become famous in one fell swoop.

But looking at Xu Yingcai's rosy face, she understood that there was no room for change in this matter.

So, she could only take the script with a little frustration and prepare to go back to the room to study it.

Huahua looked at her embarrassed look and couldn't help but remind her, "Yaoyao, you can make trouble unreasonably!"

Yuan Yao shook his head when he heard this, "My uncle is quite good to me. I can be willful in other places, but I might as well forget about messing up his works."

Seeing her say this, Huahua was speechless for a moment.
Chapter completed!