Finally finished the book...

Maybe some people think this ends a bit rough, or maybe some people think this is a bad ending.

But I personally think that this book should be almost finished here (after all, the title of the book is related to Demon Slayer, and Demon Slayer should be finished even after the Demon Slayer is finished.)

I was so frustrated that I could only do 4,000 words and two updates a day. It took me half a year to write a novel of more than 1.1 million words. But now that I am finished, let’s make a complaint!

First of all, the title of the book...

To be honest, before signing the contract, I really didn't expect that the word "ghost" could not be found. Anyone with the word "ghost" could basically not be found. Asxs. I guess the title of the book would be limited to readers... (To be honest, a person with difficulty in naming really can't think of any good name. TAT.)

And the plot...

The comment that top-up and fine-tuned comments is very well stated, and the disadvantages are very detailed. It is indeed what I need to change now. Many settings are not considered thoroughly when they are set at the beginning, resulting in many patches being pressed later...

But probably because of the strange setting problem, someone retreated in the early stage and couldn't see the back.

The setting is indeed that many of them are just temporary, and they feel very cool, and then throw them up.

Then there is character creation.

The characterization of mentor Itie's characterization in the early stage was a failure, which is a fact that I have to admit. I am eager to create a rational, but to some extent casual, a little arrogant, and a quirky mentor, but only when I create it, and other attributes that can be likable are not reflected at all.

The character of the male protagonist is not reflected, and it seems to be very plain when written, and the characters are shaped without any characteristics.

Cons summary:

1. Character creation is not good, personality cannot be reflected.

After this, I will set up a more detailed personality and learn how to reflect each personality before writing...

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2. The settings are not rigorous and there are many loopholes.

The main problem in setting is the setting of the sickle and some details in the early stage. At that time, I did not think carefully and only felt handsome when I wrote it. After that, I would set it more rigorously and improve the settings of the main characters, weapons and backgrounds.

3. The title of the book is too NT.

The title of the book is indeed a point of complaint. Although it is called Demon Slayer, it has not been in the world of Demon Slayer for long.

At the beginning, I really wanted to write something like "Starting from Demon Slayer Aba Aba", but I saw that there was already a format for "Starting from the Pillar Destruction...", so it was like changing it. But I really didn't expect that the word "Ghost" would have problems.

The next book must at least afford a normal title, otherwise it would be true that the limit on the flow of yourself is...

If you think there are any aspects that are not well written and look bad, please leave a message and feedback in the comment area. I will try my best to absorb useful suggestions!

It’s okay to have this chapter.

This summer vacation, I have to take some students and earn some pocket money, and I have to take the intermediate social instructor exam... I'm a little busy during the summer vacation, so I'll see if I can get the next book out.

I will write some extras later. Although I haven't thought about what to write yet, it should be what happened after Li finally returns to Astor...

Okay, thank you to friends who have seen this. I hope the next book can get your support! See you in the next book!
Chapter completed!