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Probably about the description of the current plot and personal complaints(1/2)

Explanation of the current situation (or the author’s complaints)

I know that suddenly publishing a chapter to explain the current situation during the update is really a sign of poor writing. But I think I can still write a chapter in this way (not)

All in all, after the end of the previous chapter, the general settings have been laid out, and the story has officially entered the development period.

At the same time, because my book is really too cold, I plan to reduce the length of the rest of it and finish it roughly before March (if I can’t finish it, I will treat it as the prologue of this story. If you want to read it later,

I can pick it up again and continue writing)

The above is a simple complaint, and I would like to explain in advance: due to performance issues, I will have to write the subsequent stories faster, and may treat this as part of a certain series in order to reduce the length (dig the hole for yourself first, and sooner or later it will be filled in)

And it is expected that there will probably be more than fifty chapters to complete.

(I also want to tell the story completely, but there is really no way. The score of this book is too poor.)

Ahem, this has made my recent writing a little confusing, so in order to sort it out, I will briefly explain what has happened so far. And there may be follow-up explanations.

First of all, it’s Duoyan, Anthony, and Andy’s side.

If there are no surprises, there is a high probability that this line that has been mentioned will not develop much later, and the space will overwhelm QAQ.

If you read this line first, you can leave a message. If there are many people who want to see it, I will change the protagonist and continue telling this story (whoever you want to be the protagonist is fine. Anyway, I think anyone can do the role of protagonist. Anyway, it won’t be because it is

I will make it easy for the protagonist)

But then again, will anyone really leave a message...

Ahem, I'm going too far again.

Because of the reduced length, it is necessary to give a rough development of the current protagonist Blacka.

And Lilith's side - in fact, the focus of Lilith's story is what happened before. If you have anything you want to read, you can also leave a message here. It is probably the line where Lilith got the coffin and Schrager, which was originally a prequel to her.

, it is expected to be quite long.

Anyway, I need to give this line an ending.

The foreshadowing of the protagonist's previous story can be considered recycled. I buried it all the way, but it didn't feel good to actually write it out.

I can only learn a lesson and pay attention to it in the next book.

In short, let’s explain the situation, that is, what happened to the protagonist before:

Blacka was raised by a scumbag father and also has a half-sister Brino.

Brino was thrown into the Black Forest by her scumbag father just after she was born, waiting for her to die - this gave the devil sealed in the Black Forest a chance. The child was forced to trade everything he had to survive.

So Brino returned to the human side - to be precise, this body was now controlled by the demon named greed.

But in order not to be bound by the rules, her body is fragile and has no strength bonus.

And she wanted to be completely liberated from the Black Forest, so she needed a human who could enter the Black Forest. So she chose Blacka.

Young children are the most susceptible to being affected, so Blacka's childhood memory was extremely confusing and she couldn't even remember what exactly happened to her. She could only remember a few points roughly.

At this time, the guardians realized that something seemed to have slipped out, but they didn't know what it was.

At the same time, Blacka reached the age of six or seven. With the help of Brino, he entered the Black Forest as planned. He prepared to use it as a medium to escape from the seal of the other world.

But as soon as I entered, I was surrounded by three guardians - the white wolf, the thieving pig, and the goblin.

The goal of survival, which was originally intended to be fulfilled as part of the agreement, was realized by the white wolf, and it granted a blessing. The fundamental reason is that with this layer of blessing, the demon's influence will be noticed once it appears.

As a price, Thieving Pig carried out the punishment of White Wolf - this was within the rules and was discussed with Thieving Pig in advance. In this way, it was an insurance measure to prevent the devil from using it as a stepping stone to resurrect.

In the same way, the ax given to Blacka by Thief Pig also has a similar effect (the story will be explained in detail later)

And because of this, they realized the problem - something related to the devil had indeed left the Black Forest.

After Blacka left the Black Forest, the Black Forest opened for this reason - they wanted to lure something related to the devil into the Black Forest. As long as they could deal with that guy, they could cut it off and escape the seal.

So goblins, undead, sick rats and thieving pigs began to trade with foreign countries - death, plague and money. They used this as a thread to lure humans to the Black Forest.

Returning to Blacka's side, by the time he returned to the human side, everyone who knew that Blacka had entered the Black Forest had been eliminated by Brino.

But because of that memory, combined with the scene he saw at that time, Blacka's perception was that he used an ax to kill the people he knew. Therefore, he often fell into indifferent self-blame. This is what the devil wants to see.

of.

All in all, it also realized that now was not an opportunity, so it spent a long, long time waiting. And because it was discovered by the guardian, it also committed suicide to eliminate traces.

In this way, the guardian had no idea what the devil was outside, but still opened the Black Forest. From that time on, Greed has been waiting for Blacka to enter the Black Forest.

Ten years later, an accident happened and Blacka was taken into the black forest.

So this story happened. The reason why the pig type attacked Blacka was because the thief pig roughly guessed that this guy was related to greed.

The reason why he stopped pursuing her later was because White Wolf basically cut off the possibility of being related to the devil by allowing Blacka to be reborn with spiritual power.

It is for this reason that the goblin paid great attention to it in the early stage. It also stopped caring about it after the white wolf gave it flesh and blood.

After experiencing many things, before entering the depths of the black forest, Greedy felt that the opportunity was ripe, so he came to Blacka.

Therefore, in the last incident, the black dragon caused trouble and provoked the goblin, and the opportunity was most ripe when the two most troublesome guys came to fight.

Blacka is the only prop that Greed can use as a resurrection pedal, but he cannot control it at will - because he has become the guide of the White Wolf, and the interference caused by spiritual power makes it completely impossible for her to take coercive measures.

So he can only be reasonable...

Moreover, an issue that absolutely cannot be ignored blocks this guy's path to resurrection - the goblin must die.

My ability setting for the goblin is the ceiling of this book. Even if the goblin is in full greed, it cannot deal with the goblin. In other words, if the goblin is in good condition, resurrection is a dead end.

So it has to find a way to draw Black to its side, and then unite the front to deal with the goblins.

The above is why Blacka appeared here, what he went through, and why the Black Forest was opened ten years ago.

Normally, this story only begins here... You can tell by looking at it, right? The contradiction is now clear, and the story has just begun.

But my grades are so bad, I can only write it down because of my perseverance QAQ

But if I want to read the whole story later, I can use the ending of the recent events as the ending point of the book. When I start a new book, I will tell the story of what happened after that. There is a high probability that the protagonist will have to be changed, because the incident with Blacka has already happened.

Now that it’s clear, it’s time for this tool man to take a step back.

In the initial setting, Blacka was a tool man - he was used by various people, but in fact he did not make any decisions by himself.

Greed used him as an opportunity for resurrection, and the goblins used him as a tool to stabilize the environment. The white wolf used him, firstly, to provide opportunities for the dependents he created to obtain themselves, and secondly, to give the devil no opportunity to take advantage of him.

He thought that the things he wanted to do were paving the way for these guys to achieve their goals. Since his freshman year, he has lost his so-called freedom since he was young. He is a puppet, under the guardian's control.

They are just puppets who think they are awake and free in the game.

Oh, when you see this, you may have a doubt.

Up to now, the key role seems to be only Blacka.

Fan, Ailan and other miscellaneous characters play a role in promoting the plot.

So why are there Noah, Xin, and Bai Ling in the protagonist group? This is the position of the protagonist group. If you join the protagonist group and the relationship with the main plot is so small that it has nothing to do with it, why don't I become the protagonist like Anthony?

Keep doing it alone.

In short, this is the process of getting Blacka's "heart".

"Heart" represents many things in my book, probably things like "self", "obsession", and "desire".

Even other characters appear from the beginning for these purposes. Everyone has their own ideas and desires, and they are all working hard for themselves here.

No one wants to be a puppet being used, but only if they know that they are a puppet. So later, Blacka realized that he was a puppet. Then he had to have the opportunity to realize that he was a human being.

Bai Ling brings him love, Noah brings him friendship, and Xin brings him wishes. With them, Blacka will gradually realize that he is not a puppet.

The person who creates is by no means a simple thing like a puppet.

Therefore, in the subsequent stories, the original setting is a consciousness issue related to "self". He gradually realizes what kind of person he is without being used, and thus becomes free in the true sense.

And when he is completely free, he will stand at the forefront of the story. He will no longer be influenced by others, and every decision will start to affect God.

At that time, what will this child who can only chop down trees and live on do? As an author, I just want to presuppose all these, and then slowly push him to a position where he has to make a decision.

Then think carefully about what decision he will make at that time - it doesn't matter to me. My purpose from the beginning of writing the book is to give myself a story that I want to read. If this book is written from the beginning

I already know the ending, that's boring, isn't it?

I am only responsible for presetting the world view, presetting the personalities and backgrounds of the characters, and presetting all interesting things. Then I take the role of the protagonist and go through the entire process.

It doesn't matter to me whether the outcome is sad or happy, I personally have no preference.

Then...ha! I have been writing for so long, but I finally understand it. Readers don't like this kind of story.

After all, what I said sounds nice, but it can actually be translated as, I don’t even know what will happen next. Moreover, this protagonist is too weak, isn’t it? This is not like a protagonist, he should be like a hero. At least.

He should be a super human, rather than a puppet who has to be supported by countless people to move.

It can be seen from the results that everyone does not like this story.

In fact, the original protagonist was Duoyan or Anthony. I was afraid that those two lines would not pass the review, so I didn’t dare to write them as the main lines.

The multi-eyed storyline discusses what is a monster, what is a human, and what exactly is oneself.

As a unique person, what he wants is to be accepted by everyone. But from the story, it can be seen that by now, Duoyan has completely become something like a fusion monster.

A guy who desires to be ordinary becomes an extremely dangerous monster? That's probably what it means. Such a contradiction will make this line look a little disgusting.
To be continued...
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