After this testimonial
Thank you for your reading. After about three years of updates, "Life and Death Playground" has finally come to an end.
Just say something, this book has condensed quite a lot of my new blood.
First of all, I would like to thank you very much for your reading all the time, thank you everyone!
There must be some sense of accomplishment about the finished book. A novel of more than 3 million words was born in my hands. It was like playing a game to complete the most difficult platinum achievement. Now I am quite excited.
But there are still many shortcomings that I can see myself.
The most important thing is that the design is a bit huge, and at my level I can't control such a huge structure. I originally designed many stories for each supporting role, and tried to make the story group look like it without affecting the protagonist. Because I think the supporting roles not only set off the existence, but also have their own stories, so I arranged a lot, but in the end most of them were useless. I always passed by as I wrote it, but when I looked back, I realized that it was embarrassing to forget to insert the content.
[To be honest, I have been using wild fruit reading to read books and follow updates recently, changing sources and switching, and pronunciation aloud for many tones, www. Android and Apple are available.]
The second is typos. This is indeed a lot of typos, which greatly affects the reading feeling. I will try to correct it as much as possible in the future and check it a few more times.
Also, because the length of the article is too long, I always forget the previous settings as I write. For example, Zheng Tianqi, I set two versions at the beginning, one version is the only child, and the other version has a better brother. The subsequent contents of these two versions are somewhat different, but I always forget which class I used at the beginning.
Therefore, if you write a new book later, you will have a more detailed self-recording and this will not happen again.
Finally, the narrative is always afraid that it will not be explained clearly, which will lead to more procrastination. This aspect is also something I should strengthen, and I will pay attention to the refined language to describe various events in the future.
After saying so much, I personally gave myself an 8-point rating and a full 10-point score. After all, I still want to give myself a higher evaluation, just as I satisfy my vanity.
Let’s talk about the content cut in the last chapter. Due to personal reasons, this book was quickly completed, but it still cut a lot.
First of all, all the Trial Light games are gone, which is obvious to everyone.
Secondly, the heroine Sakito has lost a chapter. She originally planned to go to Sakito's hometown, where she has some stories with Sakito's late mother's home.
At first, it was set that Sakito's soul weapon was to inherit his mother, not his own. So at first, he designed Sakito to lose his soul weapon in the last chapter, and then to experience some things to get a new soul weapon of his own, and the weapon would also be changed to a double sword. However, this is a waste, and finally accelerates the rhythm and ignores it.
The last chapter of the Blue Star should also have a large number of stories between cities. Sakito's elder sister went to another city as a political marriage. However, that city was still quietly controlled by evil demons, which led to the death of Sakito's elder sister.
Fast's hidden feelings for his children, the contradictions and help between humans in the Azure Star are all planned to be displayed in this chapter. In the end, due to personal writing skills and length, all of this content was cut off.
The acquisition of the last gem of the protagonist Li Feng is also deviated. The original setting was to change the soul weapon with Sakito and enter an underground lava to obtain it.
The protagonist is afraid of the previous wrong impulse to pursue the flame, and is a little afraid of the flame. Finally, he overcomes his psychological fear and moves forward, but it is still transferred into the lava because it is too difficult.
Then the phoenix left something in Li Feng's body and took back the foreshadowing. The phoenix left a feather to avoid the death of a flame (the previous time the flame was stopped by Saki Tong because it was not yet killed, so the phoenix feather was not triggered). Then he was reborn from the fire and obtained the sixth gem.
In addition to the Trial Light Game, Zheng Tianqi's story has been reduced. In the end, the ones that were mainly cut off were not allowed to write them out, and the story was written out through two or three chapters abbreviations.
It was originally expected to be a very long story, and Li Feng himself was involved. In the end, it was simplified and released, and decided to write down the place where Wang Nuo and Zheng Tianqi had set it at the beginning.
These are almost the original content cut and reduced in the last chapter, and are shared here.
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Chapter completed!