at the end of the volume

The first volume is over

The expected pace, the story of the first volume of 100,000 words, is a bit faster as some book friends mentioned.

Please don’t worry, the story won’t end too hastily, there is a lot to write about, and the reason why the first volume is so fast is because there isn’t much to write about.

After all, Harry is a mature witcher, and his curiosity is still strong, but he is no longer the young boy - he has become much more stable since being pitchforked.

Many storylines in the first volume cannot be developed.

Malfoy is a bit stupid, but he will not provoke an impossible opponent. In the following article, there will be a wonderful performance by this oily boy.

Harry would not pay attention to the provocation of a young wizard.

He won't be able to join the Quidditch team in his first year. Don't worry, Harry will definitely join the team, but I probably won't write too much about this aspect of the plot, or I'll basically mention it in one go - after all, Harry is Harry.

, even if he grows up and matures, he is still Harry.

Now that I've finished my long-winded words, let's review it carefully.

I wasn't very satisfied with the first volume. I didn't have any big problems with the rhythm, and I finished it step by step. However, some minor rhythm aspects were a bit wrong.

In the Hogsmeade chapter, there is almost no foreshadowing - although this is the reason why I changed the rest of the chapter.

In short, you have to make progress slowly.

The current results of this book are pretty good, but human greed is infinite - if it could be better, I would be even more happy, and then code the words with my heart.

The climax is not exciting enough either.

I'm not very satisfied with the text either.

Sorry, I didn't write it down.

If, I'm just saying if...

Before it is put on the shelves, one chapter will be added for every five thousand rewards. However, since it is a new book issue, even if it increases, only one extra chapter can be added in one day.

This is only my first round of recommendations, and the word count has almost caught up with the books recommended in the second round.

I haven't written for a long time, so I'm a little bit jerky, but I'm slowly getting back into shape. Regarding the potion test and the description of Snape's feelings, I can still give myself a passing grade.

It's too restrained. I need to think carefully and design the rhythm and emotional explosion of the second volume.

The Forbidden Forest is a small climax, and the last room in the Philosopher's Stone is a big climax, especially when Harry's sword is aimed at Dumbledore, which should be a big emotional explosion.

Here I am shamelessly asking for recommendations, monthly passes, follow-up reading, and rewards.

By the way, let’s talk about the rules for adding updates.

I'm lucky enough to get more rewards. If I don't finish one chapter a day before it goes on the shelves, I'll update it all on the day it goes on the shelves.

basically…

On the day it is released, ten chapters will be updated steadily. As for how to add more updates, let me see how my results are at that time.

After it was put on the shelves, 10,000 words were updated steadily every day. As for how to add updates after it was put on the shelves, I have to see how my results are at that time.

That’s it!

I hope you all will continue to support me!
Chapter completed!