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452. Move your hand away a little

Leaking Zuo Zhouzhou's identity may not necessarily make those "newcomers" anxious all day long, but the identity of this young man here can always make some people with interest less happy in the next period of time. Salmon is undoubtedly delicious, delicious, plump and without thorns, but Yang Yi's hand obviously turned the sashimi meal in the eyes of some people into a roasted crucian carp made from a fast food restaurant in the train station. I won't talk about how it tastes, but in addition to the meat, there are also thorns in the mouth. I believe these people are also very unhappy to eat.

The boy used to think that since he was loved by God and could stand out from all living beings and become a reborn person, his mentality would be more peaceful and calm. Even the most unique experience in this world was possessed by himself, and it was a cheat that no one dared to think about. Then he didn't need to be so petty about some things." "Even if he was blocking the enemy on the road ahead, he could be more generous and not play with some small tricks like a child's fighting spirit. However, after experiencing this drastic change, some opponents' practices made him change his previous views. Since he was already a destined opponent, why bother with the demeanor issue? No one would be lenient with you or compete openly in the same way because of your high attitude. In the end, if he lost, he would only be ridiculed as a loser in life.

Those who were stupid and naive in the past, but now looking back, it really makes people feel unbearable to look at them.

Fang Luo shook his head, threw the thoughts that seemed to be too much now out of his mind, and began to write faster and faster. Now there is indeed a computer, but under the system of "The Death of the Plague" 95, even if you just open a text document, you must carefully keep the record every once in a while. Otherwise, the next crash might suddenly come without any warning. Then he wiped out the words that he had worked hard for more than ten minutes. The writers who have experienced this kind of experience know best that they were suddenly interrupted when their literary thoughts were smooth, and even the hard work of the previous ones was wasted. Not to mention the depression and annoyance, just reorganizing the previous words would make people unable to continue. Therefore, compared with the less stable computer writing in this era, Yang Yi would rather choose paper and pen to complete the task. Especially when inspiration is sufficient and time is tight.

For his typing speed is less than 30 words per minute, traditional things are still more trustworthy.

Each stroke is like a deep spring of thought, flowing out in Yang Yi's pen. The rustling sound is the only sound in the room. For a moment, it is really like the movement of spring silkworms gnawing at mulberry leaves. It is endless, but it will not give people the impression of irritability, but it can calm down the heart.

If you have a gully in your heart, Yang Yi can reach almost 2,000 words per hour. If you don’t need to go back and change it carefully, then this number will have to be increased by about 500 words. Compared with the talented man who wrote the fastest but his character is questionable, this speed is of course very inferior. But in general, boys can already be called a little monster. And what you need most at this time is speed, which must be within an hour and a half.

, took out a climax of the plot that was enough to make Zuo Zhouzhou feel excited after watching it and was enough to attract his curiosity. He made him feel like he was scratched by a cat's paws, so Yang Yi's speed became more and more prominent. With his deep impression of "Bright Sword" and his grasp of the key points of commercial writing in the past and present lives, the boy had already made the starting plot of the new "Bright Sword" more commercial and passionate, making it easier for ordinary audiences to accept it.

Just when the boy was immersed in the fun of writing, I don’t know when. Zuo Zhouzhou and Gao Yuan had already entered the house. Although the latter did not reveal his inner excitement due to family education, judging from the thick books she was holding in her arms, she was obviously very satisfied with the visit. As for Zuo Zhouzhou, this guy was not interested in all literature and art, but he had a few more genuine music CDs that were not common in his hand. When he came to Yang Yi and saw that the boy did not notice his arrival at all, the Yanei of the army immediately became a prank and came behind Yang Yi with a very unkind face.

Did he roar in his ears or suddenly twitch the chair under the boy's butt? Zuo Zhouzhou hesitated, without any concern for his age and identity. For him, this was just a small adjustment in his daily life. But his plan fell in Gao Yuan's eyes. Obviously, the British-style senior sister, who was much more mature than him, frowned slightly, and seemed very dissatisfied with Zuo Zhouzhou's childishness.

Zuo Zhouzhou did not notice this. It is very likely that the little details of a person's daily life, some small details that are not enough to tell, are very serious in the eyes of others. This son was used to being careless and did not notice this at all. Maybe one day he confessed to Gao Yuan, but the other party refused him mercilessly, the young master could understand this. It is also possible that even if he was rejected, he would open his incredible eyes and question the other party, "What is wrong with me?" and other questions... But all this is not important. What is really important is that Zuo Zhouzhou suddenly stopped his plan to play tricks and turned to stare at Yang Yi's manuscript paper.

It's quite interesting, this story is good...

Zuo Zhouzhou, who was completely unaware of what he had done at this moment, just glanced on the paper and was attracted by the plot presented. Although he was a military enthusiast and was very interested in everything in the army, moreover, the plot arranged by Yang Yi was very reasonable and touching. After the writing training of his past and present life, the description of the characters and scenes was also extremely accurate and vivid. He almost used only a few hundred words to make the whole picture move.

Zuo Zhouzhou was completely attracted, especially the dialogue in the article, which almost subverted the plot he saw from the military propaganda media or in various TV stations' anti-Japanese war model dramas. Any soldiers of our army are good young people with five talks and four beauties, and any commanders and fighters of our army are good leaders who are strategists or dedicated to public. Not to mention beating people, even swearing is a rare word in Yang Yi's writing... Zuo Zhouzhou couldn't tell who the leader and the logistics minister who came out first, who was the protagonist and who was the supporting role, but both of them were "dog sun", and "his" kept silent, but how could it make people feel that they were real, as if in the glorious years of war, there were really two iron-blooded men standing in front of themselves, cursing each other for the belonging of a box of local grenades.

Zuo Zhouzhou, who didn't know much about writing, had no idea why Yang Yi's writing gave him such an impression, but he just felt that this kid's article was fluent, and he couldn't wait to know what happened next. The leader, who had a very different image from the high-ranking soldier in traditional literature, got a grenade from the seemingly stingy logistics minister. While they were still arguing, would the Japanese discover our army's arsenal?

"Hey, move your hand a little a little, I can't see the one behind you." Zuo Zhouzhou, who was attracted by the words for the first time, had no idea how his words were in Gao Yuan's ears, which shocked the world and made ghosts and gods. He only knew that he wanted to see the plot below, but Yang Yi's left hand on it blocked his sight. This was very annoying and extremely unhappy.

"Hmm? Have you finished shopping?" Yang Yi was shocked to realize that there were a few more people in the room. When he looked back at Wei An, the charming little woman nodded slightly and signaled to the young man that he had done what he had explained.

"It's over. Your bookstore is really good. I haven't seen such a whole place in the Demon City, even some rare rock discs." Zuo Zhouzhou was stunned for a moment, and then patted the record in his hand with satisfaction, but before Yang Yi could answer, he impatiently opened the boy and muttered impatiently: "It's not as stoic as you, let me see what's going on below, whether it's time to start fighting!"

Did you start fighting? Yang Yiyi was stunned. Then he saw Zuo Zhouzhou grabbing the manuscript paper, as if those preschool children met the Dragon Ball comic book they had been dreaming of for a long time, and they watched it intently.

It seems that it saves a lot of talk?

Yang Yi laughed, but said nothing, but just stood aside and waited patiently for Zuo Zhouzhou to finish reading what he had written.

...

When Zuo Zhouzhou left, in addition to the full package of rock CDs, there were also a few thin pages of manuscript paper. Yang Yi spent more than an hour to recall the content. According to his memory of his previous life, it was probably one and a half chapters of the original book. According to the boy's intention, Zuo Zhouzhou wanted to leave a contact information on the Internet, and then wait for the manuscript to be sufficient, and then package it with an email. However, Zuo Zhouzhou completely disagrees with his opinion, but can't wait to bring these pages of manuscript back to the Magic City and let the old lady read it first: "You can't write too much, and you can make so many at once. How can I tell people that there is the credit for me to sort out the materials? After I go back and ask my grandma to ask me some real things, you can slowly refer to it and write the manuscript. Then, will I have a clear conscience?"
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