I couldn't sleep at night and suddenly wanted to ask, what is the poison of this book?

I also want to hear your opinions, at least I can correct it when writing the second book.

The first time I wrote a novel, I am so confused that I have reached the present. It can be said that the outline I have thought of is completely different from the current plot!

I originally wanted to write a comprehensive comic, but after "Dream Eater", it was "Blessings for the Beautiful World" and "Inuyasha". I also read the original work. But suddenly I thought that this style of change was too strange. And everyone came for "Dream Eater". Isn't it a waste to collect it like this?

So I got into the trap of "Dream Eater". Because it is a realistic comic, I can write 20 original manuscripts in one hour, write novels, make animations, and live broadcasts at the same time... Then forget it, this does not conform to the theme of "Dream Eater" at all, and is also bound.

Only writing comics, how can you get a plot! Add a little bit of fun! Fall!

Anyway, because of my youthful mistake, I started writing with a slap in my forehead, and there are many strange things.

Hope someone can tell me the poison point.

Yes, just sauce.
Chapter completed!